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Too Raunchy

Old Jack is going to turn over new leaf Gonna be prim and proper to everyone's relief Been much too naughty Getting way too raunchy But trust me, this hiatus will definitely be brief © Jack Ellison 2015

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 7/22/2015 6:30:00 PM

No worries! We all get a kick out of your raunchiness. : ) Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/22/2015 7:10:00 PM

Must remember to keep a lid on it though! Thanks sweet thing! Love, Jack xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 7/22/2015 3:16:00 PM

Brevity at it's finest

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/22/2015 3:35:00 PM

"Brevity is the soul of wit"... Shakespeare!!!

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/22/2015 12:43:00 PM

Now, Jack will be back we all hope, with rhymes about having a grope, him not being rudee with lines about nudies, is like Groucho Marx becoming Pope. Viv

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/22/2015 3:36:00 PM

Great comeback my friend! LOL LOL LOL

Carol Eastman

Date: 7/22/2015 10:23:00 AM

Ahhh. As I suspected... Hey... John may not be writting much lately... But love his comments... You two are quite a duo... and possibly the talk of PS... Definitely to the enjoyment of Grandpa Troll... He thinks you're better than the old comics and funny pages... LOL

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/22/2015 10:41:00 AM

The Dynamic Duo!!!!!!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/22/2015 10:30:00 AM

Now there's a sight! Fishnet hose... sex on a pogo stick! What the hell does that mean? Have been trying to work that into a conversation for so long... this was probably not the time!!!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/22/2015 7:11:00 AM

No way Jack - you speak with forked tongue lol Jack and turn over a new leaf in the same sentence - never... we love you just the way you are:-) hugs Jan xx do drop by and see me sometime:-)

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/22/2015 7:16:00 AM

You are so sweet... I will be visiting shortly my dear sister... love, Jack xxx