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Too Much Roar

From a window ajar, dinner is assaulted by the acid tang of humanity; rancid in the heat. The city drools on its perceived self-importance while gingered heels tap on metro cafes. Plates of buffet reek of indigestion and to warmly meet anyone sours a face. Goblets of wine dominate this artificial scene where dressed people hide an appetite, voracious. Hypocrites! And my eyes look around at their table manners where guests dine as politely as they can---small nibbles that in truth, fakish men devour main courses. Deprived of a Sunday's blessed prayers, need they roar about how delicious is the their expensive food? Contest On A Poem That Didn't Place and More 25 Aug 2015 Franco Gonza

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Date: 9/19/2015 8:41:00 AM
Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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Date: 9/15/2015 6:06:00 PM
Wonderful write Franco. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/14/2015 1:28:00 PM
Franco, congrats on placing in Nette's awesome contest. SKAT
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Date: 9/14/2015 9:00:00 AM
"assaulted by the acrid tang of humanity" That will echo through my day as I mingle with the masses. Congrats on the high placement Franco
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Date: 9/14/2015 3:48:00 AM
Congrats on ur superb winning write Franco!
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Date: 9/14/2015 3:35:00 AM
a different feast for the sense of taste with sharp metaphors, franco... thank you for joining my contest and sweet congrats!
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Date: 9/1/2015 7:08:00 AM
Deep and intriguing Franco... ! Some nice lines. =`)~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 8/30/2015 2:55:00 AM
I found your reply to nette onclaud's blog quite interesting. Your title here caught my attention and the whole feel of this staggering poem intrudes into an otherwise innocent, sacred Sunday. Hope to read you more!
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