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Too Many Poppies

Too Many Poppies I don’t want a poppy I don’t want a shield I don’t want to visit Rows in Flanders Fields Another young person Yes a young soldier fell They laid down their life What story does it tell Off to another war In a far off land Beaches in Normandy Blood spilled on the sand I don’t want a poppy I don’t want a shield I don’t want to visit Rows in Flanders Fields My heart can’t take it Fathers, sisters and sons Why do we choose to sacrifice Precious innocent ones Are guns the answer Where does it all lead Poppies upon rows As young soldiers bleed I don’t want a Poppy I don’t want a shield Fighting old men’s battles Just leads to Flanders Fields Soldier’s Response I’ll do my best to defend this land that I love. I’ll risk meeting the angels in heaven above. Raising our flag of glory I will gladly do Even if they take me down I'll hold it brave and true. Canada my country I'll stand by her and fight. I'll take on its enemies with all my strength and might. No matter where I’m sent I'll proudly make my stand. To protect my home Its people and land. Your picture I hold Close to my heart Gives me my strength When we are apart Loved ones left at home Won’t hear our battle cry Their prayers are the hope On which our spirits fly If we don’t make it Back to our home Our sacrifice is our gift In a field marked by a stone Response to Soldiers To all of our Soldiers Who cannot be heard Your actions and sacrifice Are the final word We wear our poppies Hold our collective breaths Some questions only answered By actions and death. A co-written piece by: Richard Lamoureux and Mark Wayne Shifflet. It was a pleasure to write with Mark. We wished to point out the absurdity of men resorting to war while still honouring the men and women who so gallantly put their lives on the line to preserve our freedom.

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Date: 12/7/2023 5:58:00 PM
Richard, such a moving poem honoring with such respect those who fought for our freedoms we still take for granted; visiting our place of worship, shopping, voting, attending our school of choice. I always thank a vet when I see their baseball shaped hat with the word 'vet' on top. My uncle was a green beret & a V.Nam double amputee. Therefore this poem was moving and relatable to me and one I'm glad to have found.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/7/2023 8:15:00 PM
Thanks for this heartfelt response. There is a video of my poem on Utube. It is very impactful. If you have time check it out.
Date: 8/30/2023 8:59:00 PM
The same thoughts run through my mind And i'd guess billions of minds, human Insecurity and power lust, are part of it all Richard, and the nations that armed and equipped all such people, are removing many Basic freedoms, ( hey but there is a reason?) Just like before ' so have a good war' ????????
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/7/2023 7:16:00 PM
If economies are failing have a war, destroy everything and make a profit selling weapons. Then the economy booms when you rebuild. It’s all greed and power. The poor families kids fight the wars,
Date: 8/30/2023 8:59:00 PM
The same thoughts run through my mind And i'd guess billions of minds, human Insecurity and power lust, are part of it all Richard, and the nations that armed and equipped all such people, are removing many Basic freedoms, ( hey but there is a reason?) Just like before ' so have a good war' ????????
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Date: 8/15/2023 6:55:00 AM
Hello, Richard - First no one understands your reminding words better then me - fore I have been there and back, to lose a comrade in a battle in a far land is heart breaking - to visit many in their final resting place is so very sad indeed - touched by your words I pray now - Thank You - stay safe too! X solider Perry C.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/15/2023 7:01:00 AM
It was worthwhile writing this piece to receive this one comment. Thanks for reading and reaching out. Blessings Richard. If you go on Utube there is a video of this piece.
Date: 7/29/2023 2:09:00 PM
Last year i see... An old name I remember from my poetic past. better catch him before he goes off line. I too got burned out. But It's back. I'm writing again as I hope you are too. This piece will be one of the best I've seen in a while. Glad to see you back.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/15/2023 7:03:00 AM
What a nice thing to say. Sorry I am just reading this now. I’ve been posting a lot on Facebook the last few years.
Date: 4/1/2023 2:35:00 AM
Balanced and well crafted " antiwar poem," as your notes - thanks, too, Poet Mark Shifflet - outline. I needed this quality poem for my spirit today. Shalom shalom ( does Canada have even one enemy?)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/1/2023 8:09:00 AM
Thanks for commenting. I don’t think China likes us very much. They kidnapped two of our people. For the most part I think we are well considered around the world. We are a very multicultural society.
Date: 2/21/2023 7:40:00 PM
This gave me goose bumps, love this poem.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/1/2023 8:09:00 AM
Thanks so much.
Date: 2/1/2023 12:20:00 PM
I don't know where you are right now Richard, but I'm reading this and remembering when you and I used to read and comment on each others poems. This poem truly touches me... My Dad, a hardened military man, used to call my Mum "mother" lol... So much thanks for everything, and this poem, Richard... Hugs...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/1/2023 1:50:00 PM
Hi Jeff, these days I’m spending more time on Facebook. Thanks for commenting and for your thoughtful reaction.
Date: 1/25/2023 8:08:00 PM
Incredible, FAVE, oh my goodness. My middle name is Jo, after my dad's cousin Joe who died in WWII. I am forever grateful to him, and all those who battle for precious innocent lives persecuted under murderous madmen, and the freedoms we should all never take for granted in the free world. I love what Elizabeth McCann wrote, that would be wonderful.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/1/2023 1:51:00 PM
Very touching reaction.
Date: 1/24/2023 11:35:00 PM
Well written piece that challenges us all as good poetry should. Life still hangs on by a thread in many places, all we can do is hope each reset brings us further towards enlightenment on subject. Best regards and wishes for you and your family in 2023. David in nz
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/1/2023 1:51:00 PM
Thanks so much for reading and commenting.
Date: 1/19/2023 9:29:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this. Meanwhile, by God's grace, I greet you with the peace and joy from the Lord toward a prosperous New Year 2023 along this present: "the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/1/2023 1:52:00 PM
Thanks so much.
Date: 12/25/2022 4:21:00 PM
Wow ~ powerful message adn beautifully penned. Happy holidays to you and your loved ones ~
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/1/2023 1:52:00 PM
Thanks so much.
Date: 12/19/2022 9:49:00 AM
The YouTube is well done. Just one observation, If I may? The title here on PS does not correspond to the title with the read piece. Yes, peace has always alluded us. Kind regards and season's greetings to you and yours. Suzette:))
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Suzette Richards
Date: 12/19/2022 11:45:00 PM
You are welcome:))
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/19/2022 5:14:00 PM
Thanks for checking it out. Hugs Rick.
Date: 12/10/2022 2:44:00 AM
You both did very well and reached your objective with this piece. Soldiers should be honoured. How I also wish there was a better way.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/10/2022 11:44:00 AM
Thanks, it is pretty sad. Have you watched the Video for this one? If not check it out on UTube. Hugs Rick.
Date: 12/3/2022 7:22:00 AM
Very beautiful collab, Rick:) a nice tribute to all the fighting soldiers:)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/3/2022 10:59:00 AM
Thanks Jo, I appreciate the comment and you taking time to read my poem.
Date: 11/19/2022 2:03:00 PM
this is an amazing write. I really enjoyed the collaborative efforts of both authors. Take care Richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/2/2022 7:22:00 AM
Thanks so much for reading. If you Google my name on UTube, there is a video for this piece.
Date: 11/13/2022 4:00:00 AM
Richard, a powerfully penned collaboration, well done! What a wonderful world it would be if we all had peace and no more wars!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/13/2022 5:42:00 PM
Amen to that. ;0)
Date: 11/11/2022 7:41:00 AM
Poppy for every fallen solider. So sad. Our Man and woman both stand for one thing is Love of family , love of country to fight for our lives and freedom. Great collaboration Richard. Many blessing my friend.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/11/2022 12:39:00 PM
Thanks for such a thoughtful response.
Date: 11/10/2022 11:51:00 PM
Yes. What a good collaboration! If only we had a future tyrant detector and we could swat the pests before they swarm! Elizabeth
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/11/2022 12:39:00 PM
That would be good.

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