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Too Long Away

So very far I've traveled To this most peculiar home-- Where blindly I have wandered, As one sightless tends to roam. But I have been too long away, For all there is to see-- And I have even thought to stay, Although elsewhere I must be. And I would climb a beam of light Were it not for this, "the dance." Delaying thus, my homeward flight, For what mortals call, "Romance!" --Mel

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/5/2015 5:59:00 PM
Awesome write Mel...may your beam of light led you to great things and to here at the soup. Hugs
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Date: 3/28/2015 6:26:00 PM
glad you found love Mel - don't forget the people here who love you too - don't leave it so long before you post again! Hugs jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/29/2015 5:50:00 AM
aww I'm sorry Mel - I don't do twofaced book otherwise would follow your work:-( Hugs Jan xx
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Mel Merrill
Date: 3/28/2015 9:39:00 PM
Jan, my good friend. I flew to Pennsylvania because I thought I found love. Sadly, it didn't work out. She was beautiful, though--so pretty. For now, I am where I began, alone and looking. I post all my new writes on FaceBook (I have quite a following there, and it's easier). I haven't forgotten you, though, or my other Soup friends--and i never will. Thanks for remembering me, Jan xoxo
Date: 3/28/2015 4:45:00 PM
Yes, you've been away to long, but Im excited about your publishing endeavors..if you have time let me know just what you doing..this is a lovely piece..we Merrills are SO talented..lol. BG
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Mel Merrill
Date: 3/28/2015 9:42:00 PM
We are! Hey, don't forget we are distantly related to Emily Dickinson, so it's in the blood! Take care, cuz...hugs...mel
Date: 3/28/2015 4:26:00 PM
It has almost been a year, I am still happy to read you honey, I don't have you on facebook anymore, but I would like to again if you find me once more. I am happy to hear all is well. Hugs. :)
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Casarah Nance
Date: 3/28/2015 6:30:00 PM
I am fantastic babe, everything is wonderful in my lil' middle of the nowhere world :)
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Mel Merrill
Date: 3/28/2015 4:44:00 PM
One day at a time. Keep on smilin. Are you still workin at the pizza place? How's the kid? How's the back? Later...

Book: Shattered Sighs