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Too Deep

I’m tired but I don’t want to sleep- For when I sleep, I go down to deep- And it is hard to see the light ahead- When inside your heart feels all to dead- When your life is based on shaky ground- Every second the air seems to gain a pound- And you know you can’t fix the past- When every time you know you’ll come in last-

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/16/2012 5:28:00 AM
"when inside your heart feels all to dead"------spot on man spot on great poem
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Date: 8/13/2012 7:32:00 AM
Oh come on you can come in first, just try hard, a sad but good write hope you don't really feel that way xx
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