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Too Deep

I’m tired but I don’t want to sleep-
For when I sleep, I go down to deep-

And it is hard to see the light ahead-
When inside your heart feels all to dead-

When your life is based on shaky ground-
Every second the air seems to gain a pound-

And you know you can’t fix the past-
When every time you know you’ll come in last-

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  1. Date: 8/16/2012 5:28:00 AM
    "when inside your heart feels all to dead"------spot on man spot on great poem

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 7:32:00 AM
    Oh come on you can come in first, just try hard, a sad but good write hope you don't really feel that way xx