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Too Bare, To Bare

Too long, to long for that which I once had. Undoing the melody, that played on my heart strings. Skinning the weasel that would eat innocence. Too empty, to empty myself here and now. Body beaten, mind unwound, heart underground. Stealing joy: the occupation of fallen one. Too bare, to bare fragile soul in this state. Naked the day I awoke to see that nothing is mine. Skiving from love that left me burning. Too sorry, to sorry the pain into dark corners. Lion and snake take turns to occupy my gaze and soul. Leaving me mixed-up and confounded.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/19/2011 6:48:00 PM
Wow, this one is painful..I like the way you started each stanza..creative...BG
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Ross Thompson
Date: 12/20/2011 1:56:00 PM
Thank you very much :)
Date: 12/19/2011 3:13:00 PM
Very good, thouroughly enjoyed this poignant write :) x
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Ross Thompson
Date: 12/19/2011 3:20:00 PM
Thank you Annie :)

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