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Tonight I'M Your Angel

I sat on a cloud and watched the rain. Counted raindrops that looked the same.. Waved my hands over your day.. Blew sweet kisses that would reach and stay.. I blanketed your world with all my heart.. Fixed cracked pieces that fell apart. With tender touches I consoled what was pain.. I craddled what was broken with loving aim.. So just sleep and rest your weary head.. Tonight I'm your Angel and your bed..

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Kelli Egloff-Metzgar

Date: 11/25/2011 6:58:00 PM

very beautiful, touching write...Always, Kelli

Shannon Deane

Date: 10/21/2011 4:13:00 PM

A touching and beautiful sentiment that flows brilliantly off the tongue...luv shannon

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/9/2011 11:36:00 PM

well have fun and do everything that makes u happy.. funny u should say I am the Queen of imagery.. Ron always says I am the Queenof all things good and heated..haha... have to agree especially when the one u want to be with is so far away..remember that old song.. if u can't be with the one u luv ..then luv the one you're with? imagination time..Michael.... have a great time .. miss u much ..your Jersey Girl in miss mode..oh..

Jack Horne

Date: 9/9/2011 10:29:00 AM

Such a tender touching piece, Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/8/2011 11:23:00 PM

well Michael u seem to have outdone yourself with this magnificent Couplet luv.. amazing words of tenderness and caring.. of sheer perfection and luv.. the last line... priceless.. dynamic.. as u .. your Jersey Girl in unpacking..then packing mode to move.. oh.. my life is a revolving door..but I luv it and u ...xoxo..

Kash Poet

Date: 9/8/2011 4:15:00 PM

Amazing poetry from you Michael!Love it very much.Thanks for visiting my pages.

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/8/2011 2:06:00 PM

Michael, I had the rain today and a few other things you mention in your poem are you sure, you didn't catch a glimpse of my Thursday?? This one hits the spot.. Beautiful write.. Love Wilma

Dinda Minardi

Date: 9/8/2011 10:51:00 AM

I love all the words you've chosen here. Greatly written, Michael. I enjoyed a lot. hugs, Dinda

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/7/2011 8:44:00 PM

What a dear verse Michael, Just what a girl needs to have this kind of an angel!

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/7/2011 5:58:00 PM

Another exceptional piece. You are very talented. "I sat on a cloud and watched the rain. Counted raindrops that looked the same.." a great combination of words and lines. CR

Michael J. Falotico
Date: 9/7/2011 6:06:00 PM

Thank you very much for all your sweet comments today... Sometimes the words come out and sometimes they stay behind for another day.... luv Michael