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Tonight I Want You

Tonight I want you to blend into blue where sand meets sea... to breath in heir apparent that you understand as Me... tonight I want you to hope upon a star to wonderfully graze on starlight for I know that's what you are, I felt you smile as you drifted into Nod and witnessed pure light bourne of yr forehead not from Aegean waters but here on Cape Cod... tonight I want you to be where you want to be... to blend into blue where sky meets the sea....

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Elaine George

Date: 1/2/2010 6:19:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your poetry, Andrew. Lainie

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 12/29/2009 11:51:00 AM

Congrats on being featured this week. Have prosperous new year, and God bless you!

Sue Mason

Date: 12/29/2009 11:46:00 AM

Great imagery in this wonderful write, Andrew. Fine selection to be featured this week here at the Soup. Congratulations!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/29/2009 7:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Andrew. I wish you the best with your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 12/28/2009 3:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your fine poem being featured this week, Happy New Year >> James

Mark Riedel

Date: 12/23/2009 7:51:00 AM

Thank you all for your generous comments...I haven't been writing much of late - I can be found at artwanted.com/andrewmarx. Peace be with you this holiday season!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/23/2009 3:17:00 AM

Congratulations on being a first round survivor Andrew and the best to you in the finals. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol

P Sheart

Date: 12/21/2009 9:24:00 AM

Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/20/2009 1:45:00 PM

Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Andrew! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 12/20/2009 11:05:00 AM

Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/15/2009 5:06:00 PM

Beautiful write, Andrew. I especially love the last verse! Congratulations on your poem being featured for the week! Peace and love, Audrey P.S. Have a Merry Christmas!

James Fraser

Date: 12/15/2009 12:31:00 PM

Many congratulations on your poetry being featured on the Soup this week >> James

Robin Maughan

Date: 12/15/2009 5:54:00 AM

Congrats on the feature! Drifted into Nod ..love it! HUgs, Robin Maughan

Anthony Nutter

Date: 12/15/2009 2:11:00 AM

Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A well deserving honor. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 12/14/2009 6:36:00 PM

Beautiful poem and very lovely lines to blend into blue. Congrats with Best wishes and love for Xmas and the coming new year. Hope you would find my last two poems Wake up... and In praise … worth reading Ravindra