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Tonight

Tonight I sleep in solitude, every thought is filled with you; And yet you would not believe the magnitude of the desire I have for you.. Tonight as I think about the comments you made, I realize I haven't wanted a woman so bad in over a decade! Tonight I put my pen in hand and wrote a rhyme. About me being your man and you being my sunshine. Tonight I wondered about the color or your eyes. Even the curves in your hips and the thickness of your thighs. Tonight as I layed back listening to my walkman. I imagined you were Jane and I was Tarzan on a tropical island. Tonight I let my imagination run free; Of all the possibilities if you were here with me. Tonight although I could not see your face, I created an image of profection. You took my hand and we embraced in this heavenly connection. Tonight is the night you will feel every inch of me. So close your eyes and inhale the energy of my spirituality.... *14th Place Win in "Breathtaking Love" Contest sponsored by A Rambling Poet 2010

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Date: 5/21/2010 9:49:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win. - Mike
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Date: 5/18/2010 6:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Breathtaking Love" Jimmy. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/18/2010 12:52:00 AM
Another fantastic write Congrats and smiles
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Date: 5/16/2010 8:09:00 PM
Tonight...You celebrate a victory! Well deserved! RAY
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Date: 5/16/2010 5:26:00 PM
Congrats Jimmy on your winning poem in the B.L. contest with these lovely lines so very expressive and beautiful... easy to write when u have a great subject to focus on.. enjoy another great win..with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 12/7/2009 10:25:00 PM
Love the animalistic adventure in this one and the hunger for the ultimate connection, the spiritual bond. Great writing. Remember that in your imagination you are free to do whatever you want, in the environment you chose, and to share it with the person of our dreams. No one else has to even know about it if you don't want them to. LOL Very well penned. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 12/7/2009 9:46:00 PM
Ow my this is passionate classic and beautiful,the part of Tarzan and Jane is sweet,This girl in your dreams is an animal lover if she is Jane.that makes it a good pick,and she seems to make you happy,another good thing for my friend,Who is this Jane?.intriguing mysterious too,You painted a beautiful Night,Tonight.. so beautiful indeed..It flows like a twinkling Star in a Velvet black Universe..awesome--Charma
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Date: 12/7/2009 9:16:00 AM
WOOOW!!!!! you are going to drive women crazy LOL! Great poem! Soup Mail! love Simone
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