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"Crispy, crumbly, chocolate Christmas cookies cooling . . . " I am going to turn back the pages of time, to when my Grandma made cookies in wintertime; I would sit at the kitchen table with my cat, cooling on the counter were creations sublime. Grandma said, don't touch, and in her rocker she sat, reading my book I stopped to give my kitty a pat; But he had vanished and I was just petting air, oh, just smelling that chocolate would make me fat. Grandma snorted loudly and got up from her chair, checking the crispy, crumbly treats- she turned to stare; and she said, my dear I told your not to touch them, but, but I didn't Grandma, I was loud to declare, And at that moment we noticed my cat Tom Thumb, one Christmas delight was diminished to a crumb; how sweet are these pages of my life to recall, kitty was in the "dog house" cause he had succumb. __________________________ November 10, 2016 Poetry/Rubaiyat Rhyme/Tongue Twister Time Copyright Protected, ID 16-848-903-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Tongue Twister Time sponsor, Mystic Rose Fifth Place

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Date: 5/26/2017 1:00:00 PM
Hello dear, these series of rubayiat are cute, humerus and correct with one little exception that a Rubai should be more mystical or spiritual rather than secular and worldly... with tremendous love and respect. Pashang
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Date: 1/4/2017 6:09:00 AM
A truly delightful poem, BW. It is so witty and humorous. That is a delicious combo that tastes so sweet, and is hard to beat. You really grabbed me w/kitty in the doghouse ... that is such a great line. Wonderful poem. Happy New Year. May many blessings of love be bestowed upon you always.
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Date: 11/27/2016 5:13:00 PM
Nicely done, Constance! Congratulations on your placement! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/25/2016 6:59:00 AM
A great treat, Constance:) congratulations on your win:)
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Date: 11/24/2016 7:29:00 PM
Congratulations and blessings to you, Broken Wings. This is a delightful Christmas write.
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Date: 11/24/2016 6:48:00 PM
Congrats, Constance! A lovely Holiday write!
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Date: 11/24/2016 12:46:00 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats Constance:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/11/2016 11:39:00 AM
Cute. Your cat was a great soul. You've mentioned him many times. Those times are resurrected by the things you do today.
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Date: 11/11/2016 7:33:00 AM
A lovely poem and sweet memory BW.
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Date: 11/10/2016 8:34:00 PM
Wonderfully done, clever lady. Another one I won't even attempt. I bet it will be a winner. It is with me.
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Date: 11/10/2016 3:36:00 PM
what a charming poem Constance -great memories:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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