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Tones of Death

Tones of Death I hear the sombre tones of death they linger with no sound as eerie whispers in my mind creep echoing around. These sounds of misery and woe now mingle with my doubts and drag me down to places low with silent screaming shouts. I know that I must heed their voice although they’re fraught with fear and suffer with their helpless plight until they disappear. They feed their desolation on emotions buried deep and rising from their agony they waken from their sleep. They drain the essence of my life and rape my very soul as they seek for a spark of hope to help to make them whole. The darkness suffocates my will as inner strength is drained and riding on this slender thread for them release is gained. Again I feel the pain of loss from death’s dejected soul and hope the torment that I bear is worth my chosen role. The sombre tones of death I hear are souls that are not free but will they ever understand the pain it causes me. Ivor G Davies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/4/2015 4:37:00 PM
Well done Mr. Davies. It can be a daunting task to target death in a poem while engaging the reader in a way that they forget the dark stigma behind it, but you did a great job of focusing the reader's attention on your words as well as the concept.
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Date: 10/21/2011 4:36:00 PM
Rauwolfia... Just got round to reading comments on this. The inspiration (or desperation) for this one is the drain on one's own soul when carrying out spiritual recovery work. Judy, might post something a little more light hearted soon....
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Date: 4/21/2011 10:19:00 AM
Your talent is amazing, I am privileged to read your work and to have you read mine. P.S. I was wondering what inspired this poem, Though I've enjoyed it I don't think I fully understand it.
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Date: 4/20/2011 8:02:00 PM
Very good, now I'm ready for some humor as only you can capture!
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