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Tomorrow Has Come and Gone

Years have passed since i dreamt that night Noises in my head, waking up to that sight Overnight my city in desperate plight Tragedies followed as the population began to fade The strong wallowed, as the weak frayed Mankind shown to be true, as their actions displayed I found i was not alone, as others had escaped the curse Their actions that i witnessed, man doing his worst Abusing, taking advantage in their normal daily thirst The ones who lost their eyes, never seen their end come Even the deafened ones, never heard the sound of a gun The muted ones just gaped, as they all tried to run The fortunate ones had prayed, on the inflicted souls in strife Targeting the weak, playing with their lives The killings and the maiming in typical murderous rife Eventually the fortunate, wanted more and more They fought amongst themselves just like they did before Everyday i look all around me, forever will i abhor I walk our cities and towns, thinking what they used to be The hustle and bustle of life, in the world of you and me One day i will go to sleep, when i awake what will i see The follow up too " It Will Happen Tomorrow " http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/fantasy-6.php

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Date: 5/12/2015 9:58:00 PM
James more and more this poem of yours turning to reality... the lines are soft and vulnerably humane however the situations you displayed are threatening and scary... ~olive eloisa xx
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James Fraser
Date: 5/13/2015 2:01:00 PM
One of my Sci-Fi Fantasy story poems Olive. I really need to get my mind thinking along these lines again, for a poetry book on such writes. Scary, tense, nerving, yes, hugs little one, James xxx
Date: 10/10/2009 9:17:00 AM
Iincredible write james deeply moving I was captured by your words well done love Jayne
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Date: 10/1/2009 4:41:00 PM
Interesting point that some did not change after tragedy happened. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/1/2009 2:23:00 PM
I see a scathing review of capitalism...well done! James... jimbo
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Date: 10/1/2009 2:16:00 PM
Powerful and chilling, James! What a sequel! This time it has really happened and it seems like the last struggle for mankind to survive, perhaps Judgment Day approaching quickly. You really put strong emotions into this excellent write. (Have you seen the movie "The Day after Tomorrow"? Having read so much about historic pole shifts, I found it riviting, much like this awesome poem!) Love you, Carolyn
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