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Tomorrow

When I think about tomorrow Of days still yet to be The path t'rd the west horizon Shines clear for you and me. Words spoken long forgotten, No need to speak them now, Just hold my hand, my heart will hear Your constant silent vow. Today's sweet mix of joy and sorrow Awaits that bright tomorrow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/24/2016 12:42:00 AM
A lovely little first submission to the site, Sue- enjoyed it. Welcome. I am sure that you will enjoy your time with our merry band of wordsmiths. Have fun. Viv x
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Date: 7/23/2016 9:59:00 AM
Sue,,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/23/2016 2:24:00 AM
Tomorrow Peace.... Yeah... Sue, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Date: 7/22/2016 11:32:00 PM
Sue, well done on your first post. Welcome to poetry soup...you are gonna enjoy the community. Linda
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