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Tomorrow

Maybe tomorrow I'll tell you how I feel Let you come deep inside Show you a love that's real Maybe then I'll get up the nerve to ask you for a dance See if we can make it work Give our love a chance Tomorrow I'll try something different open up to you Finally say, I'm the one you want The one that you should choose But for now I'll just pray tomorrow comes our way Hopefully I'll find courage inside Save up for it today

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Date: 8/7/2011 11:05:00 AM

I really liked this poem, great rhythm and rhyme. It was very well written.

Date: 8/7/2011 11:12:00 AM

Didn't realize my comment went through, so I reloaded the page and saw my two prior comments which seemed to fail up.. hence the three.

Date: 8/7/2011 11:03:00 AM

I really like this poem! It had great rhythm and rhyme. Very well written.

Date: 8/7/2011 11:01:00 AM

I really like this poem! It had good rhythm. It was well written and rhymed.

Kimberly Larocca
Date: 8/7/2011 12:52:00 PM

Thanks for the visit.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/7/2011 12:09:00 AM

Hello Kimberly! the thought of waiting is just prolonging.. don't waste a minute..lol.. let him know as soon as possible.. I am the kind of gal who can't wait another day. Kidding.... tomorrow can be an infinity word, meaning take your time... all good things will come about. especially love. enjoyed the poem,..p.d

Kimberly Larocca
Date: 8/7/2011 12:22:00 AM

I totally agree DP. Thanks for the visit.

Terrell Martin

Date: 8/6/2011 11:23:00 AM

Hmmmm..I like it): Good work Kimberly...Thanks for sharing and I hope it (he) works for you if its meant to be it will. I'll pray for you 2:) Terrell Martin

Kimberly Larocca
Date: 8/7/2011 12:19:00 AM

LOL! I'm actually married. This was just one of my rambling thoughts. Thanks for the prayer anyway. Can never have enough of those.

Steven Cooke

Date: 8/6/2011 11:01:00 AM

a `lovely poem of love, i like this a lot, so well written.

Kimberly Larocca
Date: 8/7/2011 12:16:00 AM

Thanks for the visit