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Tomorrow

Days pass by, roses wear away But as our earth moves around In another voice it'll have its say What has left must come around Babies looking for tomorrow Patients will buy bone marrow A dent in the poverty sorrow At Mars they will love to row Our children and grandchildren Will be discoverers and leaders Future guitar for soul they'll listen For their poetry novel meters Smells of your love we don't have now Tomorrow it'll be a collapsing cascade Adventurous address in your eyebrows Tomorrow another pink in your shade __________________________________________ 31 October, 2019 I sense Tomorrow is the Future Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Sheri Fresonke Harper

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Date: 11/16/2019 8:50:00 PM
Congratulations Probir on your honorable mention win in the "I sense tomorrow is the future" contest. I like the control of your stanzas and lines, the future sounds full if sad. Thanks for joining.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/17/2019 5:51:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 10/31/2019 10:52:00 AM
An interesting write. Love the first verse.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 11/1/2019 3:27:00 AM
I value your comments, Kim ... Thank you ....
Date: 10/31/2019 6:26:00 AM
"Our children and grandchildren Will be discoverers and leaders" -this is for sure!
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Date: 11/1/2019 3:30:00 AM
Absolutely ... Thanks for dropping by and going through ...

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