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Tommy Tittlemouse

Little Tommy Tittlemouse Lived alone in a great big house Had no sisters, had no brothers And didn't care too much for others One day whilst Tommy was playing house When he came across a friendly mouse He said 'hey mouse, would you play with me And then we'll have a cup of tea So off they went, these two together And had some fun. It was nice weather Into the cupboards they did look And from these cupboards, cheese they took The sat outside and both got full Then Tommy trotted off to school He looked at mouse and said good day And then he went upon his way

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Cynthia Buhain-Baello

Date: 3/28/2016 8:37:00 PM

Very nice story poem Vera, engaging and creatively written. Enjoyed reading it.~~~Cynthia

Eve Roper

Date: 7/5/2015 12:07:00 PM

These stories are wonderful Hugs Eve and another 10++

Vera Duggan
Date: 7/6/2015 12:16:00 AM

Another one in the book Eve and thank you so much once again for the 10++.....Take care my friend........Vera

Kp Nunez

Date: 6/3/2015 5:42:00 AM

Lovely rhyme for kids! You're talented! Nice to know this will go into a children's book! hugs! Kim

Vera Duggan
Date: 6/3/2015 7:21:00 PM

Kim my dear thank you so much for reading this poem and commenting hope you are well, take care my friend............Vera.......

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/2/2015 8:02:00 AM

This is wonderful, breaks down the age barrier too,

Vera Duggan
Date: 6/2/2015 11:27:00 PM

Thank you so much for the comment and the visit Harry, yes it is to go in a childrens book very soon. Take care..........Vera.........

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/1/2015 3:15:00 PM

ah this is wonderful Vera so touching hugs 7 and fav

Vera Duggan
Date: 6/2/2015 11:25:00 PM

Hi Shadow, how are you? thank you for reading my childrens poem, it will be going into a childrens book through another site hopefully, thank you for the 7 and take care..............Vera................

Paul Callus

Date: 6/1/2015 8:38:00 AM

How very cute, Vera!! You could have a whole series of Tommy Tittlemouse poems, enough for a book! All you'll need is colorful pictures to go with them. All the best....paul

Vera Duggan
Date: 6/2/2015 11:23:00 PM

Paul what a brilliant idea a whole series of books, that is more a Peter thing, not me i'm afraid, thank you so much for reading Paul, hope you and the wife are well, take care.......Vera...........

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/1/2015 4:18:00 AM

simply whimsical.. you delight, vera... smiling now!.. huggs

Vera Duggan
Date: 6/2/2015 11:20:00 PM

Nette I can just see you smiling, thank you for the lovely comment and for the visit, take care............Vera...........

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/28/2015 8:30:00 AM

- A cute story, Vera - Love it :) - I wish you a wonderful day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vera Duggan
Date: 5/28/2015 7:33:00 PM

Hi Anne Lise, thank you so much for visiting my page once again and reading this little kiddies poem, I wrote it to be published into a kiddies book so thank you for reading, hope you are well, Take care...........Vera..........