Tommy

Today is a blank sheet Oh! What desires I need to meet Must some go lacking Most important are the people You being one that needs my attention My first post.. 05-08-2009

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/4/2011 5:11:00 PM

awesome lines then and now Sara.. a rare beauty of compassion and dedication to others luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/2/2011 2:28:00 PM

Very creative and interesting first post, Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/2/2011 1:01:00 PM

Love the new found inspiration of poets I have been reading today. Glad to see your poetry among them Sara. May the sun always shine down upon you and continue to bring inspiration to your soul. Love, Carol

Jack Horne

Date: 6/2/2011 11:52:00 AM

Lovely words, Sara. Your first post too : ) I thought you made a great job of the Sapphic stanza. I really must try it sometime. If you'd like advice, I know Debbie mentioned that she was working on one. Andrea wrote a great one too.

Daver Austin

Date: 6/2/2011 11:44:00 AM

unfortunately we must pick and choose. The best part is that you are unselfishly aware of the problem. Love, daver

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/2/2011 9:21:00 AM

for a first post, this is high up the poetic ladder, sara.. wonderful! :) huggs, nette