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Tommorow Is the First Day of My Life

Tomorrow is the first day of my life Today is the last For I shed all of my past Hopes, fear, dreams are cast Aside My pride... Are gone My hear t was broken No words are spoken, Just tears and sighs Where and why’s? Silently Are shed No more, the joy of waking up A tender kiss, a morning cup Of sweetness, honey filled lips Fluttering eyes and fingertips Gentle caress Bodies press No more... But life goes on New wars are won I face the world anew. This much is true My world My life Reborn...

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Date: 10/30/2011 4:54:00 AM
found this very powerfull,joan, sad in places then at the end insperational. very good, i love the way poetry can express inside feelings. and thats what makes it poetry, well done x dean
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Date: 10/1/2010 1:03:00 PM
Welcome to Poetrysoup, I would be honored to have you as friend, drop in anytime my talented friend.
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Date: 9/27/2010 5:06:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed your creative write .. so positive .. check out the contest scene to enter and good luck with luv..
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Date: 9/27/2010 8:01:00 AM
WELL DONE JOAN, NICE OUTLOOK IN LIFE. IMPRESSIVE AND AMAZING, A WONDERFUL POEM TO READ! HAVE A BLESSED DAY*luv~SKAT
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Date: 9/27/2010 5:20:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Joan. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/27/2010 5:01:00 AM
Very nice positive thoughts , Joan
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Book: Shattered Sighs