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I kill for tomatoes if only they were satisfied with some~ the fat, green caterpillars -- Weeds seem always to thrive -- like children somehow in the gutter – soil of the street never needs tilling, or nitrogen added, handily replenishes its own filth and acrid scent -- Occasionally one ripe with good seed is spared both plate and gutter then to be crucified

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Date: 2/26/2024 5:40:00 PM
I enjoy fresh tomatoes; dang predators, though. Now I'm hungry for a salad with a juicy slice of tomato! :-)
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/27/2024 10:18:00 AM
God for it! Better than meat in my opinion. Blessings!
Date: 2/25/2024 1:26:00 AM
May I say.? You have smashed this one To say the least Joe Dimino.' Wether by Design or accident who knows.?? Lol))) I am laughing at myself here btw.'
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/26/2024 7:57:00 AM
Who knows, Joe? I'm pretty set in my ways by now, and a lot of what I write, how I write it, is auto pilot -- I let it fly, hoping something interesting will result.... Thank you my friend.
Date: 2/24/2024 1:12:00 PM
Fresh tomatoes are so good. I quit planting them because of the predators, and fact I can get them cheap in summer. Your poem about them is refreshing, and makes me hungry..
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/24/2024 6:19:00 PM
It's what Italian neighbors at the backyard fence vehemently debate~ which one them has the ripest, juiciest tomatoes! Love tomatoes! Yep, difficult to keep critters from eating one's crop before harvest; also, with water so expensive now, and considering all the time and effort one begins to doubt the value. We have a lot of local farms here. So, nearly fresh I can get.
Date: 2/24/2024 8:24:00 AM
Dear Joe, Your poem, touched me in its raw and evocative portrayal of the struggle for life amidst the soil. I love how it draws parallels between the resilience of weeds and the fragility of ripe tomatoes. The way you express the desperation of those who tend the soil, only to see their efforts thwarted by nature’s whims, is deeply moving. Your words capture the paradox of existence, where beauty and brutality coexist in the same patch of earth. It’s the harsh realities we face, even in the seemingly simple act of nurturing life from the soil. Your words have left a lasting impression on me, stirring thoughts and emotions that will linger long after reading your poem. - Blessings, Daniel
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/24/2024 11:01:00 AM
You made my day, Daniel -- to think someone would see so much in this work, and take precious time to elaborate, humbles me. Blessings my friend!
Date: 2/24/2024 7:50:00 AM
Interesting thoughts Joe... and I understand you analogy... It is sad when the ripe tomatoes are destroyed..
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/24/2024 10:58:00 AM
In Italy we make sauce...with lives, to me seems never necessary. A crime unforgivable -- good thing I am not God.
Date: 2/24/2024 5:40:00 AM
Look at the bright side, if you didn't kill and eat them they'd just die a slow, ugly death anyway.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 2/24/2024 5:53:00 AM
Hi Woody; absolutely, two sides to every poem. Can't change the world, but maybe I can change my poetry. Blessings my friend.

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