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We are a perfect pair of shoes that shows the time’s effects or use. Our knot does not make itself loose as we are laced so glorious. Form: Dalit Note: This form is called Dalit, a traditional short Filipino poem which is only a quatrain, having 8 syllables in each line. The rhyming scheme is aaaa.

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Date: 10/6/2022 11:28:00 PM
Bernard…I love the Dalit form. Also, the meaning is just beautiful. Thank you,. Congratulations on all the poems you have written.superb! Respectfully, Panagiota Enjoyed my days at Poem Hunter.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 10/7/2022 3:18:00 AM
Thanks for the heartwarming comment. Please always keep safe. God bless.

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