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Together As One

Here I stay making no sound.... Here I hide so I can not be found.... Look to the stars and stare in there light.... Such a beautiful sky, such a beautiful night..... Look to the moon and I see your face.... I'm lost between earth and space..... When sun shines I can feel her warmth... But you my love are colder than a snow storm.... I still have your words stick in my head, and your knifes straight In my heart..... I know your trying to show me your strength but I can see you falling apart.... If only I could go back in time or make it stuck.... Then maybe I would have a life with a little bit of luck..... I hate to pretend that without you I can stay a live..... How can the heart live when it's stabbed with the time knife. ..? Love is more than flowers and being nice,.... It's an eternal promise it's a sacrifice. ... This is why where ever you go, I'll follow you.... If your not a live then I should live for who. ...? So together as one we shall die.... And together as one we say goodbye.... The

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Date: 1/22/2016 1:44:00 AM
Your philosophy of love speaks from the ruthless cut of it's rose thorn blade, and I am turned on by your extreme promise to fulfill love's purpose in violent tragedy or in the victory of sharing life with the one your heart needs my Violet Poetess...J.A.B.
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/22/2016 7:50:00 AM
Thank you very much my dear for ur sweet sweet comment and ur delightful visit, much appreciated, hugs / / :)
Date: 1/17/2016 10:21:00 AM
together as one...that's the best way to live...excellent write Dalia
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/17/2016 11:25:00 AM
Yes together as one my dear , thanks for the sweet comment, hugs / / :)
Date: 1/5/2016 9:19:00 PM
Derinitely a seven on this one dalia. You let your heart speak and it does speak well. I could feel your heart as i did read each line. I believe in all Love is and i love to read words that tell of love. Let your heart always sing in your poetry. Hugs! Vladislav.
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/5/2016 9:28:00 PM
Thank you very much my dear for ur precious comment , I appreciate your supportive and delightful kind words , and I'm glad you liked it....many thanks for your beautiful visit , hugs / / :)
Date: 10/7/2015 8:05:00 AM
You put a lot of heartfelt feeling into this poem, Dalia, together with a message that rings true. Nice work! Thanks for sharing.
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Dalia Shahein
Date: 10/7/2015 9:13:00 AM
Thanks alot my dear friend, I appreciate your support. Glad you liked it...u r such a nice person .. :)

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