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This warmth inside, they say it is my heart But all this time it beat and I did never notice Where did it hide? This glowing thing there Where? This spreading feeling rosy red While I'm in bed it warms me. But how did it get in? Sometimes I grin but do not understand, strange land of undiscovered magnitude, I lived so long in solitude that everything and nothing passed me by till you that is, till you, but why does thinking about you make me warm. Is it that you live in my heart? And I no longer fake the smile upon my face, the curling of my mouth. If you live inside of me, do I in you? Can that be true? I do? *** October 03, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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Harshita Chaudhary

Date: 10/17/2017 10:19:00 PM

Nice poem.

Darren White
Date: 10/18/2017 12:31:00 AM

Thank you :)

Frances Schiavina

Date: 10/9/2017 9:58:00 AM

Wonderful poem. Congratulations!

Darren White
Date: 10/12/2017 6:17:00 AM

Thank you :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/8/2017 8:40:00 PM

Darren I have enjoyed this love poem.All my best to you my friend. have agood evening my friend.

Darren White
Date: 10/9/2017 3:02:00 AM

Thank you Darlene :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/5/2017 9:51:00 PM

I missed this and also as POTD but what a well deserved poem!! :)

Darren White
Date: 10/7/2017 2:39:00 AM

Is cute, isn't it? :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/4/2017 11:40:00 AM

Well captured and well crafted

Darren White
Date: 10/4/2017 11:43:00 AM

Thank you Line :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/4/2017 5:57:00 AM

A poem of deep reflection--congratulations Darren on well deserved POTD honor!

Darren White
Date: 10/4/2017 11:42:00 AM

Thank you very much Vijay :)

Kishan Sharma

Date: 10/4/2017 12:34:00 AM

Congratulations dear,

Darren White
Date: 10/4/2017 12:40:00 AM

Thank you so much :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/3/2017 4:56:00 PM

This is a wonderful poem, Darren and I see it got POTD. Big congrats for that!!!

Darren White
Date: 10/4/2017 12:40:00 AM

Thanks so much Andrea :)

Tim Smith

Date: 10/3/2017 1:43:00 PM

So beautiful...you're love is shining

Darren White
Date: 10/4/2017 12:39:00 AM

Happy you love it my friend :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/3/2017 1:03:00 PM

- Hooray ... Congratulations on your P.O.T.D. !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darren White
Date: 10/4/2017 12:39:00 AM

Anne-Lise, thank you :)

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 10/3/2017 12:48:00 PM

Congrats on POTD, Darren!

Darren White
Date: 10/4/2017 12:38:00 AM

Dale, thank you :)

Eve Roper

Date: 10/3/2017 10:38:00 AM

Darren, I feel that if you are in love and both are mutual that you are as one,inside.. Well that is how I feel with my hubby.. Happy Birthday and congratulations on POTD Hugs Eve ~`*

Darren White
Date: 10/4/2017 12:38:00 AM

Wow Eve, thank you so much :)

Faith Adedeji

Date: 10/3/2017 9:02:00 AM

That's really good

Darren White
Date: 10/4/2017 12:38:00 AM

Thank you Faith :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/3/2017 7:55:00 AM

Congrats my friend...POTD!!!...Yahoo!...well deserved...god bless...*WW*

Darren White
Date: 10/4/2017 12:37:00 AM

Thank you so much :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/3/2017 7:29:00 AM

Hopelessly romantic Darren, well done and congratulations for POTD honors.

Darren White
Date: 10/4/2017 12:37:00 AM

Thank you Charlie, I agree ;)

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/3/2017 6:03:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD honors with this fantastically romantic write Darren!

Darren White
Date: 10/4/2017 12:37:00 AM

Thanks so much :)

Shubham Pal Chowdhury

Date: 10/3/2017 5:46:00 AM

And this is fab

Darren White
Date: 10/4/2017 12:37:00 AM

Thank you :)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/3/2017 5:16:00 AM

I love this :) Congratulations sweet P hugs xomo

Darren White
Date: 10/4/2017 12:36:00 AM

Thanks ma mo :)

Maria Williams

Date: 10/3/2017 3:44:00 AM

Such a romantic poem Darren, straight from the heart. So deserving of POTD, congratulations....Maria

Darren White
Date: 10/4/2017 12:36:00 AM

Thanks Maria :)

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 10/2/2017 10:53:00 PM

It is glorious, priceless love my dear poet. Gobble it up and give it back because when you are in love the whole wold benefits. I am so happy for you!

Darren White
Date: 10/3/2017 1:25:00 AM

heh exactly Patricia, the whole world gets a little jollier when you're in love :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/2/2017 7:01:00 PM

You are a romantic my friend. A attribute worth cultivating. Thanks for visiting and commenting on my poem.

Darren White
Date: 10/3/2017 1:24:00 AM

Richard, thank you :)

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon

Date: 10/2/2017 3:17:00 PM

I see togetherness in your style, Darren. The appeals are dexterously crafted. Glad to read your lines after sometimes.

Darren White
Date: 10/3/2017 1:21:00 AM

Thank you very much Adeniji :) You were missed.