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Together

Married in the spring many years ago She held the key to his door and his heart They will always be together they know Married in the spring many years go The advancing years now a gentle blow For fifty five years they'd not been apart Married in the spring years ago She held the key to his door and his heart For the Zeugma contest....

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/2/2014 6:18:00 AM

Barbara, Thank you for participating in my contest..I am sorry to be so long in saying my congrats to each one..I enjoyed reading this one..Sara

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/22/2014 10:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Barbara.

Leon Enriquez

Date: 8/28/2014 9:25:00 AM

Dear Barbara: Nicely done, this write. Sad though the picture painted within your verse. All the best then, Leon?

Paul Callus

Date: 8/28/2014 8:28:00 AM

Excellent triolet Barbara; your zeugma fitted in nicely, too. I had better go read the rules again before posting mine (just noticed Andrea's comment!). Have a nice day. // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 9/22/2014 10:51:00 AM

.....and back for another read and with congrats on your win in Sara's contest. // paul

Tim Smith

Date: 8/27/2014 8:52:00 PM

Love the hook line BG...held the key to his door and heart...hugs Tim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/27/2014 3:38:00 PM

very nice, sweetie. Quickly write the line or lines that showed zeugma. I think she asked that to be done at the bottom of the poem!

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 8/27/2014 5:10:00 PM

Dang! I cant find where it says that..Help!