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I cannot wait any longer for you My desire flows like a raging flood Allow me to do what I want to do My passion is the color of my blood. Coursing through every part of my body My desire flows like a raging flood Together as one we are meant to be Passion ignites within me like a flame Coursing through every part of my body Lost in waves of rapture you feel no shame Rolling together on blankets of joy Passion ignites within you like a flame Use me in every way I am your toy The time for waiting is now in the past Rolling together on blankets of joy The peak rising we are here at last The time for waiting is now in the past I cannot wait any longer for you Allow me to do what I want to do Passion pays not patience contest

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Nancy Jones

Date: 9/25/2013 10:15:00 PM

Cool! Tough form, you pulled it off beautifully. Congrats!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/26/2013 6:10:00 AM

Thanks Nancy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2013 5:04:00 PM

Very passionate indeed,Richard. What a great poem for the contest. Congrats for your win.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/26/2013 6:11:00 AM

Thanks Andrea.

John Loving Iii

Date: 9/24/2013 2:04:00 PM

congradulations. let me do what i want to do!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/26/2013 6:13:00 AM

Thanks John but I don't know you well enough. Sooru I couldn't resist *lol*

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/23/2013 8:24:00 AM

I'm so so proud of you, Richard...I LOVE THIS PIECE. Of course, it is a Terzanelle....Love seeing your name in the winning spot! :) :) :) Passionate and full of anticipation

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 9/23/2013 7:39:00 AM

Big congrats Richard! Hugs

Seren Roberts

Date: 9/23/2013 12:39:00 AM

Wow Richard, passion plus....congrats ...Seren

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/23/2013 7:21:00 AM

Thanks Seren.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/22/2013 8:39:00 PM

well done on the passionate write...PD

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/22/2013 9:09:00 PM

Thanks Linda

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/22/2013 6:50:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/22/2013 9:07:00 PM

Thanks Sara

Joe Maverick

Date: 9/21/2013 1:40:00 PM

Good to read your winning entry here Richard (well done) Joe..

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/22/2013 9:06:00 PM

Thanks Joe

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/21/2013 8:59:00 AM

Wow.......this is filled with such longing! Good for you, Richard....just what he wanted for the contest!! Congrats!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/21/2013 9:00:00 AM

Thanks Becca Congratulations to you as well!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/21/2013 9:00:00 AM

Thanks Carrie.

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/21/2013 8:33:00 AM

I knew this was a great poem when I first read it......congrats on your well deserved first place win....what a beauty of a poem :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/21/2013 9:01:00 AM

Thanks Sandra

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 9/21/2013 7:27:00 AM

Richard congrats on a fantastic win with this superb write congrats Shadow x smile

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/21/2013 8:19:00 AM

Thanks shadow it was a pleasant surprise.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/21/2013 7:05:00 AM

Congratulations for the first place win, Richard

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/21/2013 8:19:00 AM

I am so honored Dr. Ram.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 9/3/2013 4:50:00 AM

Amazing, passionate, sensual write. You just raised the bar on the contest.

Red Fiery

Date: 9/1/2013 9:00:00 AM

Very passionate Richard..it reminds me of one of my passionate poems. If u get time to read my " can I sleep with you " .. Cheers !

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/30/2013 10:56:00 PM

This one doesn't belong in any contest, it stands out all by itself, this one is brilliant !!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/30/2013 2:52:00 AM

ohh, unbridled yet somehow restrained, rich... what a combination... :) huggs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/30/2013 7:26:00 AM

Thanks Nette.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/29/2013 11:08:00 PM

Thanks for the entry

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/30/2013 7:26:00 AM

My pleasure Dr.Ram

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/29/2013 10:37:00 PM

Ahhhhhhhhhh.....the terzanelle!!!! :) Beautiful...captivating...sensual...Just one thing, if I may? Allow...still connotes patience, Richard.That raging flood in the line before could be "forcing", "pushing", "compelling" you to do what you want to do...OR..."I'm bound to do what I want to do"...But you're a gentleman...that explains your word usage! :) Very sensual and moving...You will do well....You always do! :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/30/2013 8:12:00 AM

Ahhhhhh......I see! Lovely amazing write, RIchard....So passionate

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/30/2013 7:25:00 AM

I chose allow because it is a battle between patience and passion and in the end passion wins the night.

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 8/29/2013 7:56:00 PM

You described extremely well how desire over rules patience....love this passionate write! Hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/29/2013 7:59:00 PM

Thanks Cecilia