Together

TOGETHER Saw two birds flying together: One would swing left and the other Would instantly swing to the left With wing movements quick and deft; Then the other would swoop low And the partner would also. Who to follow and who to lead - From such decisions they were freed. What seemed important was simply whether They were happy to be together.

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/9/2011 3:00:00 PM

soo warm, syd... i feel the vulnerable side of you the interplay of emotions and logic... salute.. okay, this is really yours, not mine!! :) huggs

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 4/9/2011 6:12:00 AM

Nice message with this one...well done..

Kristina Reid-Hansen

Date: 4/9/2011 1:51:00 AM

Happiness is the most important part=0) I agree...most of us make decision based on what what we think is best and end up still not being happy.....I like this write=0)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/8/2011 11:26:00 PM

I really like this little poem, Sydney. LOVE IT in fact. A fave!