Today

Morn's clouds Golden sun rising Which will rule day rain_shine? Either way God is omnipresent Watching

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Kash Poet

Date: 5/27/2012 12:31:00 PM

Love this Cinquin Sara.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/21/2012 10:29:00 PM

Another gem, Sara!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/21/2012 9:13:00 AM

This is a beautiful write, quite beautiful Sara! I really enjoyed the line, "Which will rule day rain_shine?" showing changes that could occur during the day! What fantastic poetry you have written here "Today" my friend! Great Work!!

Joann Grisetti

Date: 5/21/2012 8:00:00 AM

I have the sun, agian. We need rain, so I know God will send it soon. Thanks for your optimism.

David Williams

Date: 5/21/2012 7:46:00 AM

Sara, today he is smiling on our part of the UK..David