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“These times, they are a changing” look at who we are and lets start rearranging. So get up, move, and make a stand, either get out of the way or take my hand. We are not “lost souls swimming in a fish bowl,” but we need to look deep inside our soul. We have endless oceans, if you can't see, but we need to live, breathe, and remember, peace is the key. If you need to “imagine there is no heaven,” At midnight its finished, and its half past eleven. Make your dream a reality, and leave at the door our brutality. Maybe all we are is “dust in the wind” Regretting life, as though it were sinned. So don't go quietly into the night, and accept this loss as a win, then one day look back and think, maybe this could have been. See that “under everything, they're just another human being.” When it's too late, you'll be here and will be a victim, of your own fear. So go out and live, now is your time. These words are a lesson, not just a rhyme. So go and don't forget what I said. “If I can't be my own, I'd feel better dead.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/3/2011 7:27:00 PM
Hey, I see you have another example of that kind of poetry where we used a line from a song in each stanza. I want to thank you for that contest. It was quite a challenge for me and I'm glad I took the challenge! I remember some of these song lines you've used here, and I love the one "dust in the wind" Congrats on your win, Chris!
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Date: 6/3/2011 3:20:00 PM
Congratulations to you on this win in the contest of p.d., Chris
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Date: 6/3/2011 10:59:00 AM
Congratulations Chris on your well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/3/2011 9:31:00 AM
Congrats Chris on your great win for a great piece from the beginning on PS. awesome and enjoy.. congrats on your own contest and winners too.. a great list of winners luv..
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Date: 6/3/2011 7:12:00 AM
congrats on your excellent entry into the contest Luv*Skat
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Date: 7/15/2010 6:37:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Chris. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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