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Give me a whistle, I will blow. make me run, but rather slow. keep me warm, for dreams to glow. gift me a joy, I'm happy though. Buy me a smile, for years to come. trade me a life, for a zero sum. pinch me hard, 'coz soul so numb. paste me a song, with an upbeat gum. Kiss me a bye, to start afresh. cut me a sky, no more no less. cry me a heart, to clear the mesh. try me a trick, let life refresh.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/16/2008 8:52:00 PM
Clever monorhymes and superb flow... well done my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 10/11/2008 4:58:00 PM
This is excellent. First, I like the rhyming pattern very much. The piece flows very well also. Your use of figurative language gives the poem a special spark. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 10/7/2008 5:24:00 AM
Love the pace of this poem Rang.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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