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Toasting Death

Cheers to Death You took a life from me Your insatiable greed never ceases to be You rape, steal, cower, and cover Never accountable to the life of another Cold and indignant you choose and select Of those unaware whose lives you collect Lifeless carcass left to decay The resident soul now ripped away Held in the clutches of your tightly clenched fist Anything alive unable to resist Touch of destruction you gleefully employ Has reached out and smothered the breath from my boy So cheers to you Death victory complete Across the board life ends in defeat When you come for me as you someday will The flavor of my blood in your mouth will be shrill Pervasive bitterness the taste on your tongue My only revenge for love left undone My hatred for you, will come to know To echo eternally my forever foe

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Skat A

Date: 3/18/2016 11:54:00 PM

Hello, Jim, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/18/2016 2:32:00 AM

Hi, Jim... Nice to meet you. Thanks for the reply. I'm glad to read you are liking it here. We are awesome...lol...hugs...Linda

Skat A

Date: 3/15/2016 4:54:00 PM

WOW, that's one loud echo, Love it. Jim, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2016 4:40:00 PM

Jim, this is a deep write, you express well about death and its taking, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Jim Meissner
Date: 3/17/2016 11:28:00 PM

Hi Linda, thanks for your positive comment. I will go read some of your writes. Been on here for a couple days. Really enjoying the site. I've a lot to learn about poetic verses. Hope some people here will advise me. Nice to meet you.