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To Write of Love

If I was to write of love, then from my nib your heart would flow. Dreams would be the parchment on which I scribe, and your fragrance the sentence formed. A desire and passion would flood my page, with intermittent kisses instead of punctuation. Chapters of grace would fill your eyes, the contents feelings spill your soul. The ink from deep and pulsing veins, would secrete the validity of my emotions. I see and do not see, for with your absence my page is blank, yet in your thought reams I write. Let this page be a blanket on which those eyes could sleep, and realize my love is not a dream, but reality in reaching words.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/13/2010 3:09:00 PM
very beautiful poem, heart felt
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Date: 3/13/2010 9:42:00 AM
Deep romantic messeage Daniel..You write of love so beautifully..'Let this page be a blanket on which those eyes could sleep..and realise my love is not a dream'.these verses are so touching.'for with your absence my page is blank'..She must be some kind of woman..to mean this much to you.and She is lucky to have your verses dedicated to her,,Hope She gets to read this gem...going to my favz..Charma
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Date: 3/13/2010 7:36:00 AM
Excellent write that is emotive, descriptive and expressive...The line that says "A desire and passion would flood my page, with intermittent kisses instead of punctuation."..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/13/2010 7:25:00 AM
The abiity "To Write of Love" is your specialty, Daniel. I've been trying to figure out whom your style emulates and I do believe you have the reincarnated spirit of Lord Byron. The only difference is that he was something of a Casanova while your words seem sincere. Beautiful poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/13/2010 5:20:00 AM
I agree with Jeralynn
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Date: 3/13/2010 5:09:00 AM
A most lavish inhalation to awaken the senses Daniel......What a wonderful way to start my morning, inspiration for the heart and soul..Thank you my friend, a new favorite! Love Jeralynn
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Date: 3/13/2010 5:08:00 AM
What a beautiful poem, love Simone
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Date: 3/13/2010 4:39:00 AM
As usual, Daniel, your love poetry is superb! (If you haven't entered my chicken poetry contest, please do...I've heard you have great wit, too!) Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/13/2010 4:22:00 AM
Imaginative and so very beautiful.. all the poets must be in a "love fest" mood as so many have written on LUV but none as lovely as your words Daniel... the validity of my emotions.. a partner's dream spoken and heard... a new fav my friend.. glad u enjoyed my Sentiments of the Heart.. I have a wonderful inspiration to write from... luv.. "Sweetheart"...
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Date: 3/13/2010 4:09:00 AM
So beautiful and passionate I could sleep for eternity and be blisfully happy.....Daniel thank you for your lovely comments always.... Allie
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