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To Whom the Ground Is Bound

The truth was concealed with many branches because the trees were giants standing guard. If anyone passed by, they’d see nothing. They’d never see the ground so badly scarred. The ground, which was pounded, had been virgin. No man had entered that one spot before. Beneath titan trees, it had stayed hidden - a sacred section of the forest floor. Pummeled and raped by an evil monster, the ground beneath the trees became a tomb. A corpse was then tossed by that same monster - roughly tossed into earth’s ravaged womb. The fiend had abducted a sweet virgin, uprooting her from home and family. Her body, like the ground where she now lies, was raped and also beaten savagely. The truth cannot be known; it never will. To hide her broken body and his sin, her murderer had found the perfect spot, a place where not a soul had ever been. The earth cannot cry out. Nor can the one whose broken form lies rotting in the ground. The wind-blown trees moan dirges for the earth and for the girl to whom the ground is bound. Written Aug. 9, 2016 for the Camouflage Me A Poem Contest of Broken Wings form used is quatrain, in which lines 2 and 4 must rhyme.

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Date: 8/12/2016 10:45:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my contest with this amazing write !
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Date: 8/11/2016 6:01:00 PM
Very touching, sad and powerful, Andrea. How many times has this scene taken place for so many unfortunate victims, and some we never hear about. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/11/2016 9:20:00 AM
This made me shiver, sadder yet that it is a reality that occurs too often. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/11/2016 8:39:00 AM
Congrats on a great win Andrea...
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Date: 8/11/2016 8:10:00 AM
I was going to write for this one but I've read several and they are all touching and very well written, too much competition for me. BW has her work cut out for her. This is a excellent story with deeply disturbing undertones. It could be about a fantasy world or as easily tell a tale of a serial killer. Wonderful write Andrea.
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Date: 8/11/2016 7:58:00 AM
Eerie...but a nice read. Congrats on your 1st place. :) Sunita
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Date: 8/11/2016 4:20:00 AM
I knew this would be the winner:) Well deserved:) Congratulations:)
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Date: 8/11/2016 3:11:00 AM
Gosh Andrea the imagery is so dark and chilling, sadly we hear stories in the press of these dreadful events happening for real. Congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/11/2016 2:17:00 AM
well written and congrats stephen
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Date: 8/10/2016 11:07:00 PM
Wow! Outstanding poem, Andrea, Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/10/2016 10:54:00 PM
Yay! I guess I was right. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 8/10/2016 10:30:00 PM
Well done, Andrea - a great poem ... CayCay
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Date: 8/10/2016 9:34:00 PM
Andrea, congrats on your well deserved top placement lady :)-luloo
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Date: 8/10/2016 8:55:00 PM
That's dark, Andrea -- but, I wanted the identity and history of this so-called beast. Was it human ... or something else? Congrats on a deserved # 1 win. :-)
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Date: 8/10/2016 8:54:00 PM
It is my honor to share this spot with your talented pen, Andrea! This was a winner upon my first read !! Congratulations!
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Date: 8/10/2016 6:19:00 PM
You are truly talented Andrea...haunting write, love the last two lines!
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Date: 8/10/2016 1:38:00 PM
The poem cries out for the ravaging of nature as much as for the brutal slaying. "Because the giant trees were standing guard." Love the first two stanzas. They immediately draw the reader's attention. You are so skilled, dear Andrea. What a treat to read your work. Love, daver
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Date: 8/10/2016 10:56:00 AM
I love it when you write like this Andrea. Wow... you took yourself deep into the imagery, the girl who became the center of her own secret spot. A 7... skat
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Date: 8/10/2016 7:37:00 AM
Such a sad story Andrea, but an excellent write! Good luck with the contest, warm regards, Laura.
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Date: 8/10/2016 5:01:00 AM
Well displayed sad story -great art Andrea. All the best in the contest.
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Date: 8/10/2016 12:22:00 AM
Excellent. Beautifully executed. All the best for the contest.
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Date: 8/9/2016 10:24:00 PM
A chilling poem Andrea, with a roundhouse punch in the last line.I love it when the last line is strong . Your talent jumps of the page into readers lap!
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Date: 8/9/2016 12:52:00 PM
Bravo, cheer. cheer. What a superb write. Nice dark feel to it. Best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 8/9/2016 4:46:00 AM
I think you out did yourself with this piece. It is a good entry for the contest.This was a well written dark write. It was chilling, basically it was down right scary. But I couldn't stop reading because it so good. The imagery was dark. It was like I was reading a good novel about serial kiler/rapist or pedaphile.I've seen alot of good entries for the contest. But I think this one is the best hands down. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A undeniable seven- Alexis
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Date: 8/10/2016 5:06:00 AM
I agree with you Alexis.
Date: 8/9/2016 1:40:00 AM
A very vivid imagery combining both the stories of nature and woman..excellent execution:) A #7:)
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