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TO WHOM: Dear, come take a stroll with me and listen As I tell you a story from one of many chapters of My so called life It all began when the laws of the streets became a part of me And it doesn’t matter how far I run the pain of these cold And lonely streets are never far behind And its funny to think that you now think that You can just open your arms once again and Have me just fall into them and save me From all your beautiful spoken lies of how you’ll always Love me Did you really believe that I could be fooled again? Did you honestly believe that just because you say it? That this makes all the darkness of unwanted memories That I keep locked away just disappear Please don’t make me laugh and think again For there was a time when I did believe in all your words Believed that they were true when everything made sense When it came to me and you But that was another life time ago Now I see the real you So you can stop pretending that you even do care Care of how I’m drowning inside a sea of unseen tears That my heart is baring When I look back and remember of how naïve I was to believe That you’d always be there For I stand before I want to make it perfectly clear That the only words that I’ll ever believe from you Are the ones you don’t say The only thing I want from you is for you to be honest with me For once if that’s even possible and tell me why When I truly loved you Why did you take my love, my trust to a place I’d never Hope to find Can you answer that huh? That’s okay Cause it doesn’t matter anymore For those painful scars that you’ve created inside my heart And soul are slowly healing And this may not mean anything to you But to me its everything Since now when I look at you I don’t see the person That I did once upon a time ago that I hopelessly truly loved I only see someone that will never again have the power to Hurt me For this day forward there’s nothing that you can say Nor do that can hurt me Cause form this day and beyond I’ll always see you for what you truly are Copyrights © belong to jack 2006

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Date: 4/4/2014 7:38:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Jack :) - I choose your first very good written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/3/2014 9:57:00 PM
Hi Jack,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/2/2014 9:12:00 PM
This is a deep first poem, Jack.. , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/2/2014 9:20:00 PM
You will like it here Jack ;).... so far so good, this one's well expressed.
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Date: 4/2/2014 9:17:00 PM
Thank you very much I m not much of a poet but I love writing and I am trying to put myself out there and have others besides my friends give me feed back I am kina of shy in sharing this is a very big step for me in sharing my poems

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