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To Visit Shadows

How do I measure my yesterday's spent? As only my mind holds them ever close. Like buds from a rose, in silent descent, They crumble in time, evoking pathos. Dare visit these shadows where once I dwelled, And open their door seeking refuge. Only to see failures, still closely held, Clinging to my soul like a powered red rouge. To pause and reflect on my journey's past, And dance with reasons of self-content. To understand my life's rendered contrast, And know shadows are from my own consent. To know before a point of no return. Would deny all knowledge I came to learn. contest..Shadows 7/5/15

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Date: 7/9/2015 9:34:00 AM
Frederick, wow!!! you leave me to read your verse twice.. beautiful! Love the 3rd stanza! Your sonnets a wow! You are one among the few Soupers that I like much on Sonnet forms~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 7/6/2015 5:35:00 PM
deep musings of one's shadow-dance... a terrific poetic feast, frederick.. huggs
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Date: 7/5/2015 11:53:00 PM
Outstanding sonnet, Frederic! I love all your poetry, but there's something about your sonnets. I love to read them...this one is a winner for sure. Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 7/5/2015 11:53:00 PM
you did a great job with the topic of shadows. I am entering an oldie because I know I can never write another one like that one I did earlier! I think yours deserves a high win!
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