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To This Place

"To This Place" To this place, I owe a great deal. They try to help me, Keep it, oh, so real. In I came, totally beat down. On my face, was only a frown. Depression sucks, this we all know. But they help us here, until we're ready to go. Suicide is what, I wanted to do. Again this place, saw me thru. Judgment is what, I was afraid to face. But judgment is not, what I found in this place. My life seemed over, I was down and out. Now all I want, is to dance and shout. If this is you, give them a chance. And I promise you, you will want to dance. The staff is caring, and helped me thru. Just like the way, they will help you too. The meds they started, worked just right. And now I feel, I'm out of this plight. It wasn't easy, this much is true. But if you stick it out, this could be you. To this place, I owe a great deal. They will help you too, to keep it, oh, so real.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/13/2014 12:08:00 AM
Jeffrey,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/11/2014 11:30:00 AM
A touching write. Welcome to PoetrySoup. If you click on a name or avatar... You will be taken to their poetry. If you leave a comment, then they will have a permanent link back to your poetry."
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Date: 8/10/2014 10:51:00 AM
Glad your feeling better, and welcome to the soup. Enjoyed your uplifting poem. BG
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Date: 8/10/2014 8:28:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Jeffrey- I choose your first good and moving written poem :) - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- P-Soup Rule: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/10/2014 5:54:00 AM
This is amazing!!
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