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To the World's Best Poet

My mind's run aground with memories abound of word-sparring and writing astute 'midst merriment and mirth my poems were rebirthed with your help, you of highest repute Empty each hour my countenance dour denied of the presence of you in sunrays you're basking whilst busily crafting brilliantly penned clerihew My lover, my mentor are we finally done for defeated by timelines and distance no more enchantment or magical moments the whole of my very existence Of our nexus bereft with no purpose left since you opted for change of direction "to Licia, me life and me blood" Oo's number one poet, . ...." I daily read the diction'ry inscription You opted for sunshine no longer confined whilst I'm thumbing my dictionary, worn rhyming verse, I assume not heeding my gloom from love indifference was born

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/21/2011 12:51:00 PM
I'm so happy coming back to read this gem of a piece again, Delysia..You did well entering this fine poem for Chris. and Congrats to you dear, love...
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Date: 6/21/2011 12:26:00 PM
congrats on your win in chris's contest, I really like this one, it is poignant and reads as a true experience...
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Date: 6/21/2011 5:26:00 AM
Awesome stuff lady D :-) enjoyed dropping in on this one again.. Congratulations on your win in Chris' contest :D hope you are enjoying the warmth
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Date: 6/21/2011 4:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Chris's "Precious Gem" contest Delysia. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/20/2011 10:04:00 PM
I really loved this one the first time I read it! A very well deserved win! congratulations ,my friend.
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Date: 6/20/2011 3:15:00 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of chris, delysia
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Date: 6/20/2011 12:33:00 PM
whoopie, delysia.. my sweet congrats on your sizzling win! :) huggs!
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Date: 6/20/2011 11:33:00 AM
Coming back to your gem here Delysia-- Super congrats on your win :D
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Date: 6/20/2011 8:49:00 AM
congrats delysia on your excellent win in the contest luv with this extraordinary entry and write.. a super piece..enjoy with luv..
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Date: 6/20/2011 8:39:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Delysia. Outstanding piece. Kudos. Have a great week. luv Ralph
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Date: 6/13/2011 6:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win! nicely done :)
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Date: 6/13/2011 6:07:00 AM
Congrats on your fabulous win Delysia with this extraordinary piece of poetry..I'd known this would place high in a contest.love dear..
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Date: 6/12/2011 6:15:00 PM
An interesting write here...Congrats Delysia on your big win..
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Date: 6/12/2011 11:52:00 AM
Delysia, congratulations on your awesome first place win ;) so cool to have had a nice and sunny day ;D tc
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Date: 6/12/2011 10:44:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS AND Thank you D.H., for this wonderful entry. It was a pleasure to read again. HAVE A WONDERFUL SUNDAY,..P.D.
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Date: 6/12/2011 9:43:00 AM
Super congrats on your awesome win with this very intriguing write, Delysia :) enjoyed the rhyme and flow that you incorporated here :D
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Date: 6/12/2011 8:56:00 AM
My congratulations on the first place win in the contest, delysia
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Date: 6/12/2011 8:29:00 AM
Congrats on your first place win in P.D's contest.cheers
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Date: 6/12/2011 7:58:00 AM
Congrats delysia on your first place win in PD's contest .. a wonderful write for last as all others I have read by u luv..enjoy top billing..
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Date: 6/12/2011 2:36:00 AM
descriptively written, delysia.. perky cheers for the amazing award!! :) huggs
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Date: 6/10/2011 3:40:00 PM
Very imaginative poem, Delysia. Like Wilma, I'd love to know your source of inspiration. Apparently a foolish poet chose "licia" over you as you were thumbing through the dictionary. A highly creative rhyme scheme as well. Nice work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/10/2011 3:26:00 AM
A very creative, and clearly personal, write. Very well conceived and constructed. Regards, Robert.
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Date: 6/9/2011 2:28:00 PM
this was awesome good job! cory
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Date: 6/8/2011 8:58:00 PM
Delysia, very clever... I truly like the way you Acknowledge the birth of what one can have deep within. Well you have great taste when it comes to naming your own.. nice view and alll thanks for sharing,..p.d.
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Date: 6/7/2011 10:22:00 PM
thankxx delysia for your tender comment ..was working on adding more words here and there in the poem and saw your comment just no..so appreciate u enjoying my tender touch ..a true story and they are always the best luv.. across the miles...
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