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To the One I Lost

I’ve written maybe twenty poems or more for you, and still I know that more I’ll write. One glimpse of you and I could not ignore the tall young man in front of me one night when I was working in a store alone. I saw you watching me; it made me blush. I thought you looked like an Adonis clone! And when you smiled, it gave me such a rush. For just one week I knew you, my sweet boy, and in that too-short time I learned so much. I learned how wonderfully love brings joy, but then you went back home. We kept in touch but I’d gone on to college. In a while your calls came less and less, and where you are today I have no clue, but oh, your smile! You’ll always be my wish upon a star.

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Date: 8/17/2023 12:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/ending. Good memories are the best kind to have. Have a great day.............
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Date: 7/16/2023 12:09:00 PM
Nice love story. First love lasts for ever.
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Date: 7/16/2023 10:42:00 AM
- Some will always have a place in our hearts, Andrea...lovely written :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 7/16/2023 8:35:00 AM
True story here?
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Date: 7/16/2023 3:50:00 AM
Beautifully done. I remember lost loves, more than one, but some were definitely special like this one of yours. Love your write, as is usual. You're a inspiration to many, especially me. I love you. God bless you, Love, Gina
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