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To the Obsolete

Pass out your punishment I care not for your ideals nor am I capable to accept Pass out your punishment Your "logic" offends and I will not entertain Pass out your punishment I fear you not, you are obsolete in my mind You choose lies before truth you are unforgivable and I refuse to be unforgivable too

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/18/2015 9:55:00 AM
oozing feeling... nice poem dear :) inviting u to read my Pyramid :) ---Elai (good to b back after 1 year)
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Date: 4/15/2015 4:27:00 PM
Wow another powerful well expressed poem!!!! Loved it!
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Sarah Muldoon
Date: 4/18/2015 9:06:00 AM
Thanks so much I'm happy you enjoyed reading :)
Date: 4/15/2015 8:30:00 AM
Your poem's filled with imagination, anger, wit, and audacity. Well written. Emile.
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Sarah Muldoon
Date: 4/15/2015 3:46:00 PM
Thanks so much for your comment, and I appreciate you reading my poem :)

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