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TO THE FLOWER Your scent beckoned my weeping heart to painless flight; amidst a garden where God dusts His pretty love. Spring tints are pure and fragrant, free of guilt Your hues painted another sunrise for my eyes; when once I failed to catch the pledge of morn. A seed of hope was born to white petals blush. Though there are silhouettes of bitter yesterdays must all the phantoms of illusions fade and leave...? Your floating aroma stirred and shot my nerves; inspiring a nightingale to sing some joyous laments; It swayed with grace to dance on wind's despotic beat. among the rustling leaves which hug the earth below; So like the sun, which from distant horizon smiles; it roused the sleepy world to begin the pen of baby prose. The unfolding mystery of your petals brought my bewildered mind to peacock's reflection. Alas! All was transient. These eyes probe beneath but were blinded by the intrusion of some stray shine; Ambitions which from afar are building sprout; t'is that which let this self to irksome doubt. Lovely blossom of the wild, this sojourner nigh to tame your perfume's sweet stinging scent. A restless soul by some wicked, destiny pokes; someone called--- but pity, I couldn't tell a note. If by magic, a butterfly I could become; Let it be over my being slowly span. Then with you (though the specters in our midst are fierce), I could jet fly though miseries without fear. But am just a mortal of faith that blows this wish for only covenants call for my journey still? I cannot be forever the one who would share your sweetness; (Harken, fairies of blooms, this wilderness is not my lair.) I shall not want to witness you wilt as no time left to stay. Never again will you see me at day-break's bloom, save something special for others to experience you. This fleeting apparition I so adored; promised me burgeoning petals. "Be not afraid as seasons change, beyond today, I won't be here to see that no harm be done with all intentions to your sacred charm. As today, I leave you to Mother's Nature tender care, for I must go to some greater musing-- heaven's ground. Wilt not, as soon the rain will dash, refreshing you my dear. If I return someday-- will your sublime scent still be here?" __________________________________________________________ Your Best Poem - Poetry Contest Sponsor Shadow Hamilton ~~3rd place~~ Free Verse, Prose Poetry, haibun - Poetry Contest Sponsor Debbie Guzzi ~~2nd Place~~ POEM OF THE DAY: October 21, 2015 Inspired by Susan Seddon Boulet's painting: -----http://media-cache-cd0.pinimg.com/236x/1d/c4/37/1dc437f88c0cfb2fbcc9333bd35bb8c3.jpg ©Olive Eloisa Guillermo October 20, 2014, 10:19 pm

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Date: 7/27/2015 10:09:00 PM
Olive, congrats on your best poem. Love LINDA
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Date: 7/25/2015 4:49:00 PM
It is lovely to see this poem once again at the top! Congratulations Olive_eloi! Hugs // paul
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Date: 7/24/2015 4:35:00 PM
Olive, Congratulations on your awesome win. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/24/2015 1:20:00 PM
Dropping back again with my congrats Olive:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/24/2015 1:16:00 PM
So lovely...just oozing with emotion, breathless inspiration and imagery, Olive. I must fav this! Congratulations and hugs!
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Date: 7/24/2015 11:26:00 AM
fantastic pen Olive a great image you paint. I question line 3 free of guise try using guile instead congrats on placing hugs
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Date: 8/31/2015 7:48:00 AM
thanks much.. =')~ I appreciate you seeing this a worthy win.. =")
Date: 7/3/2015 5:26:00 AM
Now there is a good trick. How can this lovely poem written on October 20th, 2014 be Poem of the Day on October 21st, 2015 when we haven't got there yet? Still great poem though. Jim Horn
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Date: 7/3/2015 5:51:00 AM
I appreciate your comment James.. but I supposed the comments below will tell you that the typographical error is an honest mistake.. =) thanks for taking my attention to it~Olive Eloisa
Date: 6/12/2015 9:58:00 PM
Enjoy your HM....SKAT
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Date: 11/8/2014 3:53:00 PM
Some very thoughtful content Olive as everyone has said you improve by leaps and bounds! Congrad's on your win!Light & Love
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Date: 11/10/2014 8:38:00 AM
thank you Debbie.. :) You taught me much.. :) and I surely will remember the good points I must do and the ones I need to avoid.. with your contests I learned much.. :)!
Date: 11/8/2014 9:46:00 AM
Back with very merited congratulations, Olive_eloi!:) Re-reading this poem confirms my first impressions and I can see how much you have grown in stature as a poet. hugs // paul
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Date: 11/10/2014 8:37:00 AM
thanks much Paul. you have been one of my inspirations here.. :)! God bless you always.. :) hugs too... ;)!
Date: 11/8/2014 9:00:00 AM
Wow...This is excellent Olive....I love it...This is going into my favorites....Congrats on the win..
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Date: 11/8/2014 4:45:00 PM
Thanks so much Joseph.. :D Making it your fave is a wow.. :D
Date: 11/7/2014 8:37:00 PM
This is very beautifully penned indeed, congratulations on your win!! well-deserved.
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Date: 11/8/2014 4:43:00 PM
Thanks so much Sudha.. :D Congrats too.. you won too.. :D
Date: 11/7/2014 7:09:00 PM
Wow, Olive, this is such a beautiful and inspiring poem! I absolutely love it...congrats on your win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 11/8/2014 4:34:00 PM
Thank you so much Rhonda.. :) I am encouraged by your beautiful comment.. :) God bless you.. :)
Date: 11/7/2014 4:13:00 PM
Olive this is exceptional! Such tender words, softly felt amongst this beautiful garden. Congrats on your win. A fave for me...
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Date: 11/7/2014 6:15:00 PM
thanks much Mark.. :) really appreciate you making it your fave.. :)
Date: 11/7/2014 12:32:00 PM
This is absolutely beautiful Olive. Another top spot with this masterpiece. Congratulations on your win, you just shine here.
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Date: 11/7/2014 6:15:00 PM
Thanks much Brenda.. :) I appreciate it.. :)
Date: 11/6/2014 9:40:00 PM
I just knew this would do well, dear. BIG congrats to you.
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Date: 11/7/2014 6:07:00 PM
Thanks much Andrea.. :) and you too.. congrats.. :D!
Date: 11/6/2014 4:52:00 PM
A breathlessness in every line and verse, that is so delicate and beautiful Olive !! I am enthralled by your version of this painting. Congratulations and well done!
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Date: 11/6/2014 6:24:00 PM
thanks much Carrie.. :) and yours as well... :D!!! your verses inspire me.. :D!
Date: 11/6/2014 12:39:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/6/2014 6:22:00 PM
thanks Jan.. :) hugs much much.. :D
Date: 11/3/2014 10:23:00 PM
Sounds like the most heavenly arrangement of flowers, Olive.
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Date: 11/4/2014 2:58:00 AM
Thank you Sheri.. :) I was just really inspired.. :)
Date: 10/31/2014 12:52:00 AM
This was just gorgeous, Olive. In cadence and imagery, every word just melted off the tongue. One particular part that caught my attention was "joyous laments". It reminded me of Shakespeare's oxymorons like "heavy lightness"... maybe lamenting truly is joyous. If you're saying goodbye to one thing, but hello to another :)
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Date: 10/31/2014 4:09:00 AM
Yes Timothy.. :) If you will read more from that line you will see what I mean.. :) Thanks mucj for the drop by.. I really appteciate it.. :)
Date: 10/23/2014 9:15:00 AM
You have been truly inspired Olive_eloi! This poem contains a good theme and excellent use of imagery. Congrats on having this feathered as POD. hugs // paul
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Date: 10/23/2014 10:59:00 AM
thanks much Paul.. :) Yes i think so I really have been inspired.. :) hugs too.. :D@ its past 12am will go to bed.. :d! thanks
Date: 10/22/2014 12:22:00 AM
Congratulations Olive on being featured as the poem of the day... Beautifully captured... Verlena
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Date: 10/22/2014 9:28:00 PM
Thanks Verlena.. :D! as you do in your poems.. :D
Date: 10/21/2014 9:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem of the day! A very stunning read!
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Date: 10/22/2014 9:27:00 PM
Thanks much Suzanne.. :) I appreciate it.. :D
Date: 10/21/2014 7:49:00 PM
Congrats sweetie on this honor...hugs Tim
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Date: 10/22/2014 9:27:00 PM
Thanks much Tim.. :) hugs bearly hugs too.. :D!
Date: 10/21/2014 4:33:00 PM
Wow, the pic really inspired you, Congrats on being poem of the day, and I am sure to be back to grats you on a contest win :)
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Date: 10/22/2014 9:22:00 PM
Cassie Thanks much.. yes it really did and somehow i really love flowers.. :)!!!
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