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To Sleep

To Sleep Perchance to dream That doesn’t seem Like too much to ask So deep And so extreme One won’t waken But I’m taken to task Summoned in the middle of the night By tormentors in my head I should ignore - them but instead I rise Like a ghost on the prowl I rise Like a hunting owl I rise And run afoul of the law of Sleep To Sleep How late the hour What is this power That shakes me from rest? I keep Answering the call I’m bound to fall And fail the test I long to drink from the river Lethe Forgetting all that’s been said I should ignore it - but instead I rise Like a thirsty vampire I rise Like the flames of a fire I rise Even though I tire from lack of Sleep My one desire to sleep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/27/2010 12:56:00 PM
Exellent writing. It is so hard to fight for sleep when it won't come. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/24/2010 2:50:00 PM
I can't recall the entire scheme of this poem you seem to be modeling it after, but I bet it is carring the same types of meter, etc. I did the same thing with MY entry. Only I modeled a different poem. Congratulations! andrea
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Date: 6/24/2010 2:29:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem very much, congratulations on your win ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 6/24/2010 5:31:00 AM
Congratulations Corinne on your win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Your Snooze, You Choose". Love, Carol
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Date: 6/24/2010 1:40:00 AM
Hi Corinne :)!! Congrats on your win in my contest--your rhyme just really spoke to me and I deeply enjoyed how dramatic it all is, those "I rise" lines were pretty powerful in my opinion, haunting in their own way-- congrats again! --nikko :)
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Date: 2/27/2009 3:34:00 PM
Sounds like your on the Lethe alright, but in Charon's boat. Shoot that there damn three-headed dawg and get ta sleep. Hey, I like this one a LOT! Love, daver
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Date: 2/27/2009 12:59:00 PM
Great song lyric! Many people can relate to these words. Insomnia is fairly common. Especially love the 'I rise...' verses. Love, Shar
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Date: 2/27/2009 10:49:00 AM
I love htis piece my friend. I love the imagery throughout and the poem reads so well. I especially like the last stanza..good work.
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