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To Silent Symphonies

Down the drainpipe the water clanged, flowing in loud torrents, pit-ter-pat-ter the metal sang a sad and sorrowful lament. The sky had burst with tears of woe and sparrow fled to nest. The butterflies where did they go when all of us sought rest? So long, the earth was drowned in rain that ducks swam on the lawn. No dry beds, no solace from pain just the pat-ter, forlorn. Tears ran silent in sympathy for the losses yet unknown. Ah, for bright sunshine’s harmony and kindnesses once shown. Pit-ter-pat-ter the drainpipe plead, on and on it muttered, certainly, it was time it said for kinder bread and butter? Date: 9/26/11 Poet: D. Guzzi

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/3/2011 8:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Flowing Water" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/1/2011 5:05:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on a terrific win with lovely words of poetic art luv..
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Date: 10/1/2011 1:39:00 AM
Great win Debbie. Please don't be offended but I was wondering if this was written about the hurricane? I don't mean to sound thick but I am always interested in the poem's meaning. Lee
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 10/1/2011 8:47:00 AM
No this was written for the contest during a rainstorm and during the time last week when it seemed everyone on Soup was calling me names and I was crying which IS the Silent Symphony [tears] tears are the second layer of flowing water here.
Date: 10/1/2011 12:53:00 AM
Congratulations Debbie on your win in the Flowing Water contest.
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Date: 9/30/2011 11:39:00 PM
Congrats on your 4th place win, Debbie! Kim
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Date: 9/30/2011 11:22:00 PM
A great take on the contest Debbie and a great win. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/30/2011 10:59:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on a great big win with flowing waters contest luv.. great lines ...
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Date: 9/30/2011 10:49:00 PM
congrats Debbie on your 4th place win in the contest
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Date: 9/27/2011 9:44:00 PM
still not showing in the contest Debbie
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Date: 9/27/2011 4:33:00 PM
enjoyed the melody in this liquid picture you have shown us Debbie, thank you for comments, i am not aware of being in a contest..i was thinking of entering one, but am not aware of any placments..
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