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Does life to anyone really make sense? Or is all mankind actually this dense? God’s offer of wisdom and truth to man, When accepted, we seldom understand. Sometimes blinded by reason and logic. Surely, it’s not genes or biologic. I ponder and think of the things I don’t know, It came to me; the culprit is ego. Its goal is to always self-edify, It secretly cloaks what’s seen by the eye. An illusion creates, a false belief, We can’t see God’s truth without some relief. To receive God’s truth, see life through His eyes, To the deceiver, we say our goodbyes.

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Date: 11/18/2023 7:25:00 AM
It's all about faith, Bill. Believing in things we cannot see, and now that my eyes are crossed from looking at that picture you posted, I can't see a thing. lol I'm sorry I haven't been commenting as much as I should on your poetry. I'm sending soup mail.
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Date: 11/18/2023 4:30:00 PM
Thank you for commenting whenever you can, Lin. I get where I can't get to everyone sometimes, I understand. Thanks for the soup mail. Bill
Date: 11/16/2023 7:53:00 PM
Yes, we with the help of the Holy Spirit have to reach for the Light of the world and turn away from darkness to be able to see the truth. I like the truths in this one. Thanks for sharing it with us and for the nice visits to my page. Sara K
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Date: 11/17/2023 4:36:00 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting on my poetry, Sara. I always enjoy reading your poetry. Have a pleasant weekend, my friend. Bill
Date: 11/16/2023 12:55:00 PM
A very wise God-centered poem, Bill. Mankind needs to listen and pray to Him. Great penning.
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Date: 11/16/2023 3:10:00 PM
Thank you for the thoughts and comments, Regina; I agree. Have a pleasant afternoon, my friend. Bill
Date: 11/16/2023 10:24:00 AM
Dearest Bill,That is an Amazing optical allusion—get it it’s a poetic device—illusion. thanks. bye. see you tomorrow. ibill im your biggest fan.
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Date: 11/16/2023 10:24:00 AM
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Date: 11/16/2023 2:26:00 AM
Absolutely dear bill, today we look around and what do we see? I see inflated egos, little knowledge, some-their actions too dont make sense to me, simply because some are infants in adult bodies, lacking social skills, compassion and kindness, so many prefer to live in illusions, maybe their idea to not face reality. I see so many with challenges, turn to faith, keep God close, helps, we are all sent for a reason, life is a test/trial but we as humanbeings we are learning as we grow:luv it
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Date: 11/16/2023 1:28:00 PM
Thanks for the thoughtful comments, Ink. I deleted the other comments and blocked my biggest fan. LOL I hope that ends that, I'll have to wait and see. Thanks for the heads up on the post, my dear friend. Hugs, Bill
Date: 11/15/2023 6:33:00 PM
That's an amazing optical illusion you've chosen there, my friend. I'm dizzy in 3 seconds gazing into it... As for Truth: Hard to find an 'Innocent' among us today, one who simply is too simple and/or too pure to practice deceit. ~ Simple Wolf
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Date: 11/15/2023 9:45:00 PM
I think we all do it at some point in our lives, some actual know they're doing it. LOL Good observation, gw. I've never been one to think I was perfect, but I've known dozens of people that thought they were. again, LOL. Have a pleasant day, my friend.BB
Date: 11/15/2023 5:22:00 PM
:) what a picture , wonderful poem for one to open their mind to seek the truth
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Date: 11/15/2023 9:47:00 PM
Thanks for the visit and comments, Stephan. Slowing down and being mindful is a step in the right directions to growing closer to our Creator God. Blessings, my friend. Bill
Date: 11/15/2023 4:41:00 PM
Bill, your sonnet is amazing. Your creativity shines through every line. Kindness and helping others are stressed throughout this work. Each verse demonstrates your deep wisdom. Your description of pursuing fulfillment is spot-on. Brilliant approach.
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Date: 11/15/2023 5:08:00 PM
Thanks for the encouraging words, my dear friend. Sonnets are still my favorite form of poetry. I enjoy writing the last two line the most. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Date: 11/15/2023 4:23:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem, Bill and I agree with the culprit, too. Maybe, since as children we're treated as children, we treat life with the same falseness(with stories, not with reality. I don't know.) Love the last two lines. And I closed one eye to keep that picture from spinning; good one!
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Date: 11/15/2023 4:29:00 PM
Good trick, David. Big subject, all thoughts are welcome, my friend. Have a great week! Bill
Date: 11/15/2023 4:13:00 PM
an exquisite sonnet, dear hubby. Each verse is packed with a tidbit of wisdom. You're right, the Great Deceiver is here to self edify...perfectly said...he creates illusions until we see through His eyes. Well said, mein Held. I think the sonnet form is your forte. hugs, me...eastside writing bear
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Date: 11/15/2023 4:22:00 PM
Thank you for the comments and the hugs, my Eastside Writing Bear, Cuddles Bear. Du bist de beste! :-) Big bear hugs for you. Bill
Date: 11/15/2023 3:37:00 PM
Life make sense, it is a test in wide sense. The last line is great! Your friend ~ AA Please, read the Quran
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Date: 11/15/2023 4:24:00 PM
I have read the Koran, Abdullah, when I was studying world religions while in college. I appreciate your suggesting I look in other spiritual books, my friend. Have a great week! Bill
Date: 11/15/2023 3:26:00 PM
I disagree with SO. Life does have a purpose, and the Grand Purposer has laid it out in black and white. One of my fave verses in this regard is Ecclesiastes 12:13. Have a great night
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Date: 11/16/2023 2:20:00 AM
Not sure I said life does not have a purpose...
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Date: 11/15/2023 4:27:00 PM
I agree, Tom, I'll add verse 14 to that also, my friend. Thanks for reading and commenting on my poetry, Tommy. Have a great week, my friend. Bill
Date: 11/15/2023 3:23:00 PM
Great sonnet Bill my dear friend.. I don't think life is suppose to make sense.. I think people should learn to be content and enjoy it.. there will be bad times and there will be good times... life is a balance of holding on and letting go.. important to be kind and help others.. as these things always return to the sender...
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Date: 11/15/2023 4:37:00 PM
It doesn't have to make sense to me for me to live a good and purposeful life, my friend. I agree with you, being kind and helping other people is a good starting point to find one's purpose in life. It's been said, "Do unto others as you would have them do unto you." I'd add, it happens that way a lot. They treat us as we've treated them. I've found kindness and treating others well does come back to us, maybe not from the same person. When we are a blessing to someone else, we will also be blessed.

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