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To Quench You

I move slowly still closer Melting in your attention to shock hopeful dawn The shuddering clouds are smiling Coaxing me to frenzy forward The roots are growing on me, wrestling amongst each other Clutching, wanting to become me Calmly, knowingly...when seen, I hide Revealing my weakness, my need to please I am holding my own, guarded inside the nearest obscurity I desire your dreams to tip me, As I whir in your tempestuous dusk Mirrors reflect monsters moving with intent With appetites that no longer shame me Facing you, full form I am the longing phantom, flooding shadows, Hiding my tears in my frustrations I would release them if I knew for certain you would drink them

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/14/2015 10:16:00 PM
A dear companion and in the form of the spirits you describe will surely take the good and the bad, but walking this path is not an easy one. There is a lot going on here, but I have a mental picture of it. You might reveal yourself, but then what happens? There is such suspense. I like the fact that the forces/beings are not like a person, but much more like some kind of diverse mix. This is much more in keeping with a realistic view of nature and life itself.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/18/2015 12:21:00 AM
Thank you dear! I love your input! ~Laura

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