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To Pray On Your Flesh

I want to place my final prayer upon your plush velvet neck murmuring my needs warmly on that expressway where the crossroads of love and lust unite focusing the steam of my soul there confessing wholeheartedly that my heart cannot move without you, with my thick, steady hand rotating around your priceless grail feeling the communion of our desire come to life as your mouth becomes the chalice that holds my heartbeat in this moment that confirms our sanctity - J.A.B.

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/21/2017 5:03:00 AM

Gorgeously romantic poem, Justin. The layered emotional depth is intricately woven by a creative tapestry of words. Great poem. May love light your path always.

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/22/2017 6:37:00 PM

Two hearts united in purpose ignites a divine fire upon the flesh...creativity becomes spiritual...to love survival is to love life, the survival of your sanctity. Thank you for the kind comment Poet...J.A.B.

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 10/19/2015 8:12:00 PM

Enjoyed Justin... Verlena

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/20/2015 1:42:00 AM

To enjoy our final prayer is all that we can ask for Verlena, thank you for visiting me again unique Poetess...J.A.B.

Dalia Shahein

Date: 10/19/2015 7:04:00 PM

Omg !! This is an incredible poem , it'so damn romantic I really liked it and enjoyed reading it very very beautiful words I don't know if this is a fictional or not but if it's not then the one u love is a very lucky lady and a very special one from the way u described ur desires

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/20/2015 1:39:00 AM

She is my great desire Dalia...J.A.B.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 10/3/2015 11:05:00 AM

A well and a great write Justin, I'm intrigued by your write.........A.M.

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/4/2015 1:44:00 AM

As love intrigues us, our passions pursue the pinnacle of paradise Afolabi...J.A.B.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/30/2015 1:44:00 AM

As your mouth becomes the chalice that holds my heartbeat..This line has captured my thought with its beauty. I want to place mu final prayer upon your plush velvet neck..Another unique line..Exceptional.A fave . justin-Charma.

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/30/2015 2:35:00 AM

Love becomes a pure heat in the intimacy of those lines Charma...she releases the climax of my heart, her love be my soul supper. Knowing that this poem has caressed your sensuous mind really brings joy to me my Lady Hawk...J.A.B.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 9/29/2015 5:46:00 PM

What an extreme great write Justin. Your write is wow to read, it flows smoothly within my mind and intoxicated my sense. A fascinating write indeed.........A.M.

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 9/30/2015 3:33:00 AM

Of course I love, your write always intrigued me.

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/30/2015 2:11:00 AM

Her love puts a WOW in my pulse Afolabi. I'm very happy that you like this love rhythm...J.A.B.

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/27/2015 1:54:00 PM

Justin, I just came back to read this amazing piece again. Its definitely a fav:-)Alexis

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/28/2015 12:05:00 AM

Yes Alexis, warm the vital points of your love with this living prayer of a man's worship for the woman whom is the nexus of his divine bliss and the Lady of his pious kiss...J.A.B.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/26/2015 11:59:00 PM

"The steam of my soul" is a beautiful and quite a powerful line that expresses the depth of one's passion... A lovely poem, Justin... Heavenly!

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/27/2015 1:46:00 PM

A steam that simmers persistently into the skin of her most delicate need...thank you for the sensitive, beautiful comment Kelly...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/25/2015 1:33:00 AM

Needed a second read, Justin.....liked the line....my heart cannot move without you....Beautiful!

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/25/2015 2:19:00 AM

My heart did not hesitate when that truth blew upon it so warmly Eileen. Love's domination is sweet...that's my favorite part...J.A.B.

Agona Apell

Date: 9/24/2015 8:12:00 AM

I never before had this poetic perspective of the neck: "The expressway where the crossroads of love and lust unite". That's powerful imagery ...

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/24/2015 6:31:00 PM

There be no better place to pray for joy...thank you Agona, she ignites original love throughout my Being. J.A.B.

Kelli White

Date: 9/24/2015 2:35:00 AM

Symbiotic Union of ethereal proportions.

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/24/2015 3:10:00 AM

Yes Kelli, a synergy of passion, truth, intellect, spirit and love that is phenomenal. Thank you for the marvelously metaphysical comment Kelli...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/24/2015 2:04:00 AM

Murmuring my needs....when those needs are heard and feed....that is where love lives and breathes. It is not the case for many.....Justin, this is beautiful...I thought at first there was a mistake in the title. Your passion is passionate in its extreme. The one you love is blessed. Congrats on lifetime membership.

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/24/2015 2:54:00 AM

Our hearts have excellent hearing, and our bodies refuse to ignore the feeling of love. There is no mistake, our prayers know well the skin of our desire Eileen...J.A.B.

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/24/2015 12:55:00 AM

Justin, this is another outstanding piece of art.The way you penned your expressions of love was priceless.One again you have moved me with your amazing pen. I'm going to fav this beautiful write :-) Alexis 7 P.S. your title alone had so much intrigue.

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/24/2015 1:28:00 AM

Being in love with the most special woman in the world has brought Divinity closer to me than anything else I've ever known Alexis. God, life, passion makes so much more sense with her heat around my heart. Thank you for honoring this love Alexis...J.A.B.

Janet Lorenzo

Date: 9/23/2015 7:00:00 PM

beautiful

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/23/2015 7:09:00 PM

divine :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/23/2015 7:06:00 AM

A moving passionate rendition.

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/23/2015 1:29:00 PM

My Lady and I have sacrificed much on the alter of love, and in return have gained the purest love truth Richard. J.A.B.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 9/23/2015 3:29:00 AM

Sassy,passionate poem like the use of some terms here that adds intrigue, appeal and stir to thoughts feelings and more: communion, expressway, chalice.. the use of symbolism!! Moving piece indeed!!but you always do with your poems~Olive Eloisa =`)

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/23/2015 1:17:00 PM

We are innocent in our belief in love...sassy and unstoppable, yet we pray for strength and guidance. To have a woman of your intense faith and intelligence appreciate this prayer is auspicious Olive...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/22/2015 11:14:00 PM

"on that expressway where the crossroads of love and lust unite, focusing the steam of my soul there"...love those lines to this hot and sensuous poem, Justin. Each touch gives drive to the need, and the passionate murmurs of the fervent prayer, are all very purposeful. I love the language you use to support the beautiful title:"confessing...communion...in this moment that confirms our sanctity." Wrapped up perfectly, effectively and pleasurably. This one's a fav for sure! Always, Laura

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/23/2015 1:39:00 AM

She and I are zealots for love...extreme in our translation of passion, true to our bond. I'm so happy that the continuity of erotic faith, from title to final touch turned you on and piqued your intellect Laura...J.A.B.