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To Only Feel Better

one destination through different actions to only feel better in thirst drink water soft cushion's bed to sleep to only feel better knowledge to know things buy things for happiness to only feel better

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Funom Makama

Date: 5/28/2015 10:28:00 AM

Great lines with majestic eloquence.. Your meandering of words still did not prevent your peice from giving out its message. This is an absolute 7!

Bl Devnath
Date: 5/28/2015 10:32:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment and for 7. Loved always,bl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/21/2015 4:09:00 PM

Right ideas penned in this one ..I enjoyed reading it today..I was delighted that you dropped by..Sara

Bl Devnath
Date: 5/21/2015 4:32:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always,bl