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To Not Care

How could one In signature of note Drawn upon the breath, in a beating heart Gasping , sword pierced Breathing I cared, half closed eyelids Hurt deep inside In the wounded sigh Did not cost you A second thought, tears in fractured pain Wounded deep It would be nice If even it meant something To care just a little In the answer no, tearing the insides Out of me Within the heart Death of you Weeping emotions I cared

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/11/2013 2:26:00 AM
You misted my eyes Liam..If everyone in life cared as he should have there ll be no more tears.You rouchec me with your siciere verse
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/11/2013 3:24:00 PM
AHH CHARMAINE THANK YOU FOR THE VERY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT THERE WILL ALWAYS BE TEARS OF SADNESS UNFORTUNATELY THANKS DEEPLY APPRECIATED

Book: Shattered Sighs