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To My Mother

To Mom Poetry Contest Sponsor: Francine Roberts At birth the cord was severed, though our hearts stayed connected, I’ve seen more beauty in your heart the more I have reflected. You quilted a Peter Rabbit blanket to keep me warm after birth, swaddled me with adoration, for I gave you much self worth. Toddler days came, and Kindergarten days were swiftly gone, remember the first time I sang my abc’s? It was always my favorite song! About the time I was in fifth grade you taught me to be a young lady, for I am your fourth child and will always be your sweet baby. By the time I was a teen you had taught me my good manners, the older I became you had faith in me that I’d keep good standards. Off to college I flew and you allowed me to spread my wings, I never forgot how you taught me to sway on the playground swings. You sent me off to be married with a twinkled tear in your eye, the hardest thing you had to do, was to your daughter, say goodbye. During my mid-twenties I welcomed a baby girl just like you had before, I learned how to be a good mother from you, all the love I had in store. So today here you are, a wonderful gramma to your grandchildren, just like you were with all of your wonderful grown-up children. Your warmth and tenderness have become my greatest qualities, I can only pray my daughter too, will grow up to follow me. I thank the Lord for your wisdom and faith in my decisions, may I keep being the woman I am learning from your precision. Your footsteps I have ensued will always be my greatest treasure, thank you for filling up my cup and showing me life’s pleasures. Date Written: April 23, 2016

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Date: 6/9/2016 3:17:00 PM
Congrats Laura, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 6/4/2016 2:30:00 PM
Congrats on your beautiful placement. Loved always my lovely friend, bl
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Date: 6/4/2016 1:32:00 PM
Lucky mom to have such a poetess daughter,this is so lovely Luloo!
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Date: 6/4/2016 9:48:00 AM
Luloo, back again to congratulate you on your nice win in this 'to mom' contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/4/2016 12:26:00 AM
I think all daughters fell the same, but only a rare daughter like Luloo can express it so poignantly and emotionally! Congrats on your placement!
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Date: 6/4/2016 12:23:00 AM
Nicely done. Who knows how many generations of good people will be traced back to your lovely mother. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/24/2016 2:49:00 AM
Such a wonderful dedication my dear... the poem flows like a beautiful song... Your mother must be very proud with this piece..7/7. Hugs red
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/24/2016 10:19:00 AM
thank you Red :)-luloo
Date: 4/23/2016 3:48:00 PM
I agree with Jan...what a wonderful tribute to your dear mom, LuLoo. Beautifully written, and you are so blessed that you can share your life with her. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/23/2016 4:46:00 PM
thank you Sandra :)-luloo
Date: 4/23/2016 3:06:00 PM
what an amazing tribute to your mum LuLoo. I loved the 2nd couplet especially - brought a lump to my throat - good luck in the contest I hope you do well:-) hugs jan xx7
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/23/2016 4:45:00 PM
thank you sweet Jan :)-luloo

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