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To Much Pain

This woman lost her son in a car accident and she never got over it,but she says her son still live's on with her through her daughter she see's him .She says thats thats the best thing of having twins they look a like so both of them are there.If somthing would happen to you I dont know what I would she said. She's over pertectaue and careing she wont let her daugther out her site,but oneday she got a important phone call from her mother saying her dad has passed away and she leaves clare home alone and a fire started,but clare cant get to the phone and she cant jump out the window because they live on the 36th floor in a apartment so while clare is screaming for help her mother is on the way to her dads hospital room and crying and weepingshe get in the anthor phone call saying clare her daughter hsa been burnerd alive in a apartment fire and so she left to get in the car and she note on the seat of the car she didnt see before. It reads,Dear mother i will do anything for you no matter what we go through how hard things get i will always love you. From:Clare The woman passed out and her head hit the horn. An hour later someone see's her and rush back into the hospital and after she woke up she rushes to the car to see her daughter but it was to late they took her body away already.The woman and her mom decide to have the furnerl the same day and the day the furnerl came her mother went into a comea and the woman said she cant take ut anymore so she hang herself and after all her mother was just under stress.

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Date: 10/22/2010 12:31:00 PM
Interesting story...I wonder if it is true..This is too much on one family if it is a true story..So sad...Sara
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Date: 10/4/2010 5:17:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Johneesha. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/3/2010 10:01:00 AM
thank you so much i really apreaciate your comment.
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Date: 10/3/2010 6:11:00 AM
Fine narrative with a fine story woven in this write. enjoyed the story, johneesha
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