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To Miss Kami Richards

Your beauty astounds me, your voice enchants me, And i'll never hear a sound so sweet, Until I depart for Hades shore, Your voice holds me like a statue, it lilts so soft and gentle, And it would drive me crazy to, to never hear another word from you, But whist destracted by your voice another feature attracts my eye, My heart began to sigh, as i looked to your direction, your curls cascaded down your face, and I at once was touch by grace, as pure beauty radiated from your face, and as your eyes caught mine, I was at once lost in space and time, and never once in my whole life have i been like that before, so if truth be told and Helen launched 1000 ships, i belive you could launch 10,000 more, and in my poetic heart will your beauty live forever more

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/10/2010 1:38:00 PM
That flowed very nice and smooth, love how you so sincere about it all. Also, will have to read more of you as well. Enjoy your day.:)
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Date: 5/3/2010 10:08:00 AM
From the poetry I have been reading today I can see the weekend handed out a lot of inspiration. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and wish you continued inspiration throughout time Cameron. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/2/2010 7:21:00 PM
A nice,y penned picture
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Date: 5/2/2010 5:09:00 AM
Very poetic with great metaphoric language and descriptiveness...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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