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To Leave You

Although gently adored, I leave you to be free in your own madness as this is your birthmark--- My love did not cut your umbilical chord. Contest of PD, any poem under 5 lines #1

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/25/2014 6:47:00 AM

Gifted pen..Great entry into the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit by my page..Sara

Susan Palli

Date: 9/19/2014 12:50:00 AM

Congrats! well done

Ma Yaseen

Date: 9/16/2014 12:11:00 AM

enjoyed reading it... Thumbs up

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/27/2014 6:15:00 PM

very intriguing one! congrats for your win.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/27/2014 9:25:00 AM

Congratulations on a well-deserved win! Excellent write! Pandita

Jan Allison

Date: 8/27/2014 7:29:00 AM

very deep write. many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/27/2014 5:46:00 AM

At first it seems very intriguing, but deep and meaningful, Norma. congrats

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/26/2014 9:47:00 PM

Norma :) Congratulations! Thank you for supporting my under 5 lines or less contest. Enjoy my blog "One Hard Word" when and if you have time. Always ~ LINDA ~

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/18/2014 11:56:00 AM

- Great ! - Well done, Norma ! - Like it :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

B. Maxine Revolution

Date: 8/13/2014 1:38:00 AM

Simple yet complex :) thank you for sharing