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i know you almost as well as i know myself over the years i have learned your moods your face each expression each crease each worry line, each crinkle around your eyes. where they began why they are there would i erase them if i could? never... for if i could if they were no longer a part of you... it would take away your past and mine.. and ours together.... perhaps there are different.. more delicate ways of saying that life with you is good to live... but knowing you, as well as I do... i know this will do ______________________________ Carrie R.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/24/2013 7:24:00 PM
Carrie, congratulations with your poem on Andrea's, favorite list. always~ Linda
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Date: 4/23/2013 6:31:00 AM
Carrie, I hope my wife feels the same about my wrinkles...when I get them! ;) Congrats with this lovely poem!
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Date: 4/23/2013 3:14:00 AM
Love this poem. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 4/22/2013 10:44:00 PM
I loved it. Many congrats dear friend.
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Date: 1/6/2010 9:24:00 AM
A great and well written and warm write of exceptance. Perfect in every sense great job
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Date: 1/5/2010 6:06:00 PM
Beautiful poem...enjoyed...Good luck in the contest....Marty
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Date: 1/5/2010 11:16:00 AM
Beautiful and sensitive. Good luck in the contest. Love, daver
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Date: 1/5/2010 11:07:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Carrie. May your writing take you to new heights each and every day. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/4/2010 11:00:00 PM
Awesome! Carrie! A winner in my book. Good luck on the contest. Happy new year, Caroline.
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Date: 1/4/2010 10:41:00 PM
I love it!!!
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Date: 1/4/2010 10:14:00 PM
Carrie, gee, in a totally different style from mine, this one reminds me of my own entry! I just love how you dealt with the topic of real and enduring love. This is just wonderful and one of my favs!! And I would enter that one contest but I just have no clue how I'd do it and I'm back to work now after the holidays. No time, no time, GRRRR (andrea)
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Date: 1/4/2010 9:55:00 PM
Wonderful structure filled with beautiful words. Wow, best of luck in the contest and I think you don't need it with this powerful write...Raul
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